Saturday, April 16, 2011
Six Sentence Sunday
These sentences are from A New Dream. In this excerpt, my heroine's mother has invited my hero for dinner for the first time. A New Dream is available at: http://www.astraeapress.com/#ecwid:category=662249&mode=product&product=2676585
It felt like spring tonight even though it was almost Halloween. It was nice of Mrs. Emerson to invite him to dinner, but he figured he only had about a fifty-fifty chance of having a good time. Violet’s father still didn’t like him and made no bones about it.
Well, no use to stand outside like a little puppy begging to get in. He rapped on the door, and to his chagrin Fred Emerson came to admit him. He had pasted a smile on his face that showed most of his teeth which, if Matt thought about it too hard, was downright scary.