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Sunday, November 20, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

Hello and thanks for stopping by.  Today's excerpt comes from The Best Selling Toy Of The Season which is available at Melange Books.

Nikki watched as Tommy shrugged his coat off. She must have lost her mind. Why had she accepted help from this man? Only a fool depended on a man to take care of her. Her own father had never done anything for her and look at the kids’ father. No, she knew about men and the trouble they brought to women, but in the space of less than an hour she had allowed Tommy Price—golly but he was handsome—to replace the broken toys and help her with her tree.

6 comments:

Gayle said...

I think Tommy's going to be the man who changes her views. :-)

Sondrae Bennett said...

It always makes me sad to read about women who've been let down by the men in their lives. Hopefully Tommy can prove her wrong. And I do love a good holiday story! Compelling six!

Christine Warner said...

I love the cover of this story! Great six...hope Tommy can change her opinion about men (I think he'll do it) :)

mirriamsmyth said...

She just needs that one man who'll change her POV about them. :) I think Tommy's it.

romancingalix said...

oh a conundrum! Great six.

veronicascott said...

Tommy already sounds like quite a keeper. Hope he can persuade her to trust and take a chance. Snippet really drew me in fast, great scene setting!