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Sunday, October 21, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday: Fire!

Welcome to my blog.  In today's six my hero has arrived at my heroine's house to find it on fire, and he can't find her anywhere.

Lesel Wolf has a secret, a dangerous secret she’ll go to any lengths to conceal. When she’s paired in a charity game with sexy marshal Andy Bryce, a man with secrets of his own, her carefully constructed world comes crashing down, and Liesel’s on a collision course with her past.

A solid wall of intense, voracious flames blocked the front door, but an outside staircase leading to a second-floor balcony was still passable.
He ripped off his shirt and tied it around his mouth and nose, then dashed up the steps to the balcony. Smoke billowed and swirled against all of the windows. He stared inside but the smoke prevented him from seeing anything. With no warning the window burst outward, spraying his chest with glass and barely missing his face. Hot sparks pelted his bare skin, raising water blisters, while small shards of glass worked their way into his skin.

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Monique DeVere said...

Wow! Tense. I'm very interested to find out what happens next!!

FCEtier said...

Real cliff hanger! Great six.

Sarah W said...

Such intensity in so few sentences! Very well done!

Eleri Stone said...

Yikes. Nice tension.

Kate said...

Great details in this six! Can almost feel the heat and smell the smoke. Well done!

Elaine Cantrell said...

Thanks so much to everyone who read my sentences. As usual, I appreciate your comments.