tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post3047005132595731687..comments2024-03-28T05:45:29.339-04:00Comments on Hope. Dreams. Life... Love: Snippet Sunday and Weekend Writing WarriorsElaine Cantrellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-16155214251952677742014-05-04T16:35:39.444-04:002014-05-04T16:35:39.444-04:00Like everyone else, I can't wait to see what n...Like everyone else, I can't wait to see what news he's bringing!<br /><br />Great set up, Elaine!Sarah Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13265589529909793312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-53891360979199770072014-05-04T15:59:03.677-04:002014-05-04T15:59:03.677-04:00Very intriguing. He's definitely worried about...Very intriguing. He's definitely worried about the outcome. Nice snippet. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11050367040290791184noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-80537208584289461972014-05-04T15:19:52.132-04:002014-05-04T15:19:52.132-04:00Oh my, intense. You really capture that feeling of...Oh my, intense. You really capture that feeling of the last few minutes before the whole world changes due to some announcement. Mnor quibble, just me, but the name Rhett takes me straight to GWTW. Sorry! Excellent excerpt, can't wait to read more.Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-4550281270589361962014-05-04T15:07:14.072-04:002014-05-04T15:07:14.072-04:00What a lot of emotion and scene setting packed int...What a lot of emotion and scene setting packed into this snippet. Very nicely written, and quite the cliff hanger as well.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-17859377133446409202014-05-04T14:41:25.010-04:002014-05-04T14:41:25.010-04:00Wow! I so want to know what he has to tell her! Gr...Wow! I so want to know what he has to tell her! Great job building suspense!<br /><br /><a href="http://amydurham.com/" rel="nofollow">Amy Durham</a>Kelly's Momhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02670823346986342594noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-40429894461073527022014-05-04T13:53:39.556-04:002014-05-04T13:53:39.556-04:00Lives ripped apart - don't like the sound of t...Lives ripped apart - don't like the sound of thatsuehttp://sassyspeaks.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-45132134633247158342014-05-04T12:53:56.444-04:002014-05-04T12:53:56.444-04:00Boy, what happened in this last trip?Boy, what happened in this last trip?Sue Ann Bowlinghttp://homecomingbook.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-73406355027617432972014-05-04T12:39:46.027-04:002014-05-04T12:39:46.027-04:00Lovely description setting the scene and then POW!...Lovely description setting the scene and then POW!Suspense ahead. Exceptional snippet. Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-28552036368092289152014-05-04T12:11:11.260-04:002014-05-04T12:11:11.260-04:00Wow, what the heck does he have to say to her? Wow, what the heck does he have to say to her? Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05551671528722336812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-1675020306898600922014-05-04T11:05:05.490-04:002014-05-04T11:05:05.490-04:00Now what, now what?? Great sense of suspense here....Now what, now what?? Great sense of suspense here. <br /><br />Possible tweak: maybe drop "his head buzzed" or "he felt dizzy" since the meaning of both is almost the same. <br /><br />It reads great though. Very smooth.Marciahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07092928480361131154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-64687275464400497482014-05-04T10:57:18.705-04:002014-05-04T10:57:18.705-04:00Excellent snippet that put me right in the scene w...Excellent snippet that put me right in the scene with them. Great tension for the following scene.gemma parkeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06275261646534324484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-72554661601226626862014-05-04T10:06:32.260-04:002014-05-04T10:06:32.260-04:00What a tease. 'm afraid to find out what he...What a tease. 'm afraid to find out what he's done. (But of course I need to know and I'll be back.)Gem Sivadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01233835029255570402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-43161599345230406902014-05-04T09:56:31.234-04:002014-05-04T09:56:31.234-04:00Uuuuugh! WHAT does he have to tell her. Excellent ...Uuuuugh! WHAT does he have to tell her. Excellent job of sucking the reader in, Elaine! <br /><br />Write faster! This is already on my TBR! :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-82963808819827039382014-05-04T09:53:47.820-04:002014-05-04T09:53:47.820-04:00What does he have to tell her? He's so upset.....What does he have to tell her? He's so upset... great snippet.Elyzabeth M. VaLeyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00261951650310680514noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-43486688207820808552014-05-04T01:50:07.217-04:002014-05-04T01:50:07.217-04:00Color me intrigued. I'm dying to know what it ...Color me intrigued. I'm dying to know what it is that he has to tell her. P.T.Wyanthttp://ptwyant.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-90955631966449410082014-05-03T22:56:13.398-04:002014-05-03T22:56:13.398-04:00Whoa, this is terribly intriguing. Nicely done sni...Whoa, this is terribly intriguing. Nicely done snippet, Elaine. Great snippet.Siobhan Muirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00595776353171184107noreply@blogger.com