tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post3640728879116636412..comments2024-03-28T05:45:29.339-04:00Comments on Hope. Dreams. Life... Love: Snippet Sunday and Weekend Writing Warriors: Turnaround FarmElaine Cantrellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-61176672428441931612018-11-26T21:22:47.936-05:002018-11-26T21:22:47.936-05:00So awful that they are reaping the "sins of t...So awful that they are reaping the "sins of the father." I hope they'll find an end to their situation.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-3830026773551975182018-11-26T05:24:52.866-05:002018-11-26T05:24:52.866-05:00What a grim situation, clawing up from the misdeed...What a grim situation, clawing up from the misdeeds of others. Their grit says a lot about them. (side bar: parag 2 - "eyes" can't sweep but a "gaze" can!)Nancy Gideonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07493107610530282642noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-17977894645630817462018-11-25T15:59:23.755-05:002018-11-25T15:59:23.755-05:00House repairs never end, do they?
Sounds like thei...House repairs never end, do they?<br />Sounds like their lives need a bit of repair too. Great snippet. Karen Michelle Nutthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04083893569523248900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-61259386385564229832018-11-25T10:52:08.791-05:002018-11-25T10:52:08.791-05:00It is a vicious cycle all right, ignoring the hous...It is a vicious cycle all right, ignoring the house repairs because of their circumstances and it all only gets worse. Sort of a metaphor for their lives too...I like these guys, wish things would go better for them! An effective snippet...Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-30432337006186914762018-11-25T09:14:02.106-05:002018-11-25T09:14:02.106-05:00As I read, your writing captured me. I felt every ...As I read, your writing captured me. I felt every word.Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-17855515632463310562018-11-25T09:12:53.141-05:002018-11-25T09:12:53.141-05:00Sounds like they're in a rough patch indeed. :...Sounds like they're in a rough patch indeed. :(Amy Braunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07333226005270392991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-90237118899845957152018-11-25T00:26:33.480-05:002018-11-25T00:26:33.480-05:00This establishes the story problem quite forcibly....This establishes the story problem quite forcibly. Good job.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com