tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post3934483871122894632..comments2024-03-28T05:45:29.339-04:00Comments on Hope. Dreams. Life... Love: Snippet Sunday and Weekend Writing WarriorsElaine Cantrellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comBlogger20125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-28648168094923074332015-05-18T00:30:58.202-04:002015-05-18T00:30:58.202-04:00She is obviously not sure about her engagement - w...She is obviously not sure about her engagement - what gal who is truly smitten would give up time to be with the man she loves? Hope she makes up her mind sooner rather than later, I'd hate to see the fiance strung along.Chelle Corderohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15412268726863698528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-1684406523134800912015-05-17T22:09:54.543-04:002015-05-17T22:09:54.543-04:00Fun snippet. The carnival ride imagery is very eff...Fun snippet. The carnival ride imagery is very effective-- mirrors what's going on well. JTsuruokahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05173187123835069767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-90653514905498663592015-05-17T21:38:13.810-04:002015-05-17T21:38:13.810-04:00I think she'll quickly warm to him. Hand-hold...I think she'll quickly warm to him. Hand-holding is so underrated nowadays.Carrie-Annehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05810154378449825641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-54784330028020469842015-05-17T19:02:45.146-04:002015-05-17T19:02:45.146-04:00I have no idea about the handholding, but I'm ...I have no idea about the handholding, but I'm sure you'll make the decision meaningful to readers!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-89793156885599915912015-05-17T18:42:41.756-04:002015-05-17T18:42:41.756-04:00Oh course I want her to let him hold her hand, but...Oh course I want her to let him hold her hand, but I also want her to be fair to the fiance. :)Karen Michelle Nutthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04083893569523248900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-73874579619875877072015-05-17T18:16:08.518-04:002015-05-17T18:16:08.518-04:00Well, he's moving in just a little bit, but I ...Well, he's moving in just a little bit, but I like it. I hope she lets him hold her hand. Interesting she's afraid of roller coasters because her life seems to be imitating one. Great snippet.Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-37608747689054388152015-05-17T12:49:15.237-04:002015-05-17T12:49:15.237-04:00Oh the poor fiance. Great snippet.Oh the poor fiance. Great snippet.Ceciliahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07076648307785084672noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-21776574566544850902015-05-17T12:28:33.722-04:002015-05-17T12:28:33.722-04:00Obviously, she's enjoying his attention. Maybe...Obviously, she's enjoying his attention. Maybe she'll squeeze his hand and then drop it. Aurora Springerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10368905407459425208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-859931571635108292015-05-17T11:50:01.613-04:002015-05-17T11:50:01.613-04:00People with a history together almost always have ...People with a history together almost always have trouble when they reconnect, even if it's only for a moment.<br /><br />I personally hope she grabs at his hand with a big playful grin on her face and starts giggling, pulling him toward the ride. Not because she's in love with him, but because she's in love with life.Eden "Kymele" Mabeehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01550337993392791643noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-90499681154399141052015-05-17T11:11:21.802-04:002015-05-17T11:11:21.802-04:00Holding hands-absolutely. The dialogue is sweet fo...Holding hands-absolutely. The dialogue is sweet foreplay. Good writing, Elaine.Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-81710027872721639682015-05-17T11:06:26.517-04:002015-05-17T11:06:26.517-04:00Romance on the pier :-) Good eight <3Romance on the pier :-) Good eight <3Sara Harrishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10519801029696101409noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-36980149880916081442015-05-17T10:54:02.727-04:002015-05-17T10:54:02.727-04:00I think she's made her decision about him alre...I think she's made her decision about him already, but hadn't acknowledged it. Good snippet, Elaine.Siobhan Muirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13653107467839760917noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-4242496289527601722015-05-17T09:43:29.983-04:002015-05-17T09:43:29.983-04:00I think she is going to let him all her hand and t...I think she is going to let him all her hand and that the wedding is going to be cancelled in a few days. But hum... poor Alex really, he deserves better. Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13346034896296813841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-49567416515598356022015-05-17T09:36:09.025-04:002015-05-17T09:36:09.025-04:00I think he's pushing a little, but she does ne...I think he's pushing a little, but she does need to make a decision.<br /><br />(Okay, yes, I want her to hold his hand. :) )Sarah Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13265589529909793312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-53519330489211971242015-05-17T09:30:23.666-04:002015-05-17T09:30:23.666-04:00I'm with her. Hate roller coasters. Yes! Hold ...I'm with her. Hate roller coasters. Yes! Hold his hand :) Love second chance romances.Ashley Yorkhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02174690230384292472noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-41784477114036371592015-05-17T05:38:17.651-04:002015-05-17T05:38:17.651-04:00She will hold his hand ... but I agree with the ot...She will hold his hand ... but I agree with the others, I feel bad for the fiancé as well.Iris Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07282988971025667976noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-18605729481942052662015-05-17T04:18:45.151-04:002015-05-17T04:18:45.151-04:00I feel bad for the fiancé, but somethings obviousl...I feel bad for the fiancé, but somethings obviously not quite right in her life. Maybe this little bit of emotional chaos (it sounds like that's what the evening will spark) will do her some good.Aheilahttp://thewriteaholicblog.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-36605494626438072152015-05-17T03:25:52.289-04:002015-05-17T03:25:52.289-04:00There's something not right about her fiancé--...There's something not right about her fiancé--and her mom. I think her mom might have pushed her into this engagement...<br /><br />I think she's going to pull her hand away. It's early in the story.<br /><br />Good 8, Elaine.<br /><br />I spent what free time I had today reading Rest Thy Head. :-) I'm at a point that I really don't want to put the book down! That Drew...what a psycho!Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-77426681342612101262015-05-17T02:28:13.085-04:002015-05-17T02:28:13.085-04:00I love the playfulness in this snippet, but I agre...I love the playfulness in this snippet, but I agree with Jennifer -- I feel bad for her fiance. P.T.Wyanthttp://ptwyant.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-12468283270323812432015-05-16T23:03:38.571-04:002015-05-16T23:03:38.571-04:00I feel bad for her fiancé, but I still hope she hi...I feel bad for her fiancé, but I still hope she him hold her hand. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08486824276807575493noreply@blogger.com