tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post4125884947637814991..comments2024-03-28T21:33:06.181-04:00Comments on Hope. Dreams. Life... Love: Snippet Sunday and Weekend Writing WarriorsElaine Cantrellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-46377444886501319282018-01-31T15:35:38.973-05:002018-01-31T15:35:38.973-05:00This is a great storyline! I am very interested!This is a great storyline! I am very interested!Danii X Hallowshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01030080907936799415noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-71525692802527225122018-01-30T18:58:33.097-05:002018-01-30T18:58:33.097-05:00Great beginning. Tense, frightening. Good job.Great beginning. Tense, frightening. Good job.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-45650916799053558342018-01-30T10:20:10.847-05:002018-01-30T10:20:10.847-05:00Damn, that was really bad timing. Damn, that was really bad timing. Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13346034896296813841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-52768591939548286192018-01-29T16:51:26.306-05:002018-01-29T16:51:26.306-05:00What a tense and dramatic excerpt, and an edge of ...What a tense and dramatic excerpt, and an edge of the seat way to finish it off!Hywela Lynhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13789711554354184386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-81988920022902596972018-01-28T18:50:57.149-05:002018-01-28T18:50:57.149-05:00Really high action snippet! That is not a good pla...Really high action snippet! That is not a good place to fall, for sure. o.OAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18141508426287090331noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-31848094566043586292018-01-28T13:12:14.968-05:002018-01-28T13:12:14.968-05:00Great opening! Great opening! Amy Braunhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07333226005270392991noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-39670902640492735242018-01-28T12:56:32.736-05:002018-01-28T12:56:32.736-05:00What a way to start a book! I am totally engaged ...What a way to start a book! I am totally engaged and on edge!Nancy Gideonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07493107610530282642noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-52384560974040055992018-01-28T12:17:13.223-05:002018-01-28T12:17:13.223-05:00Tripping and falling at this point can't be go...Tripping and falling at this point can't be good. Great tense scene.Karen Michelle Nutthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04083893569523248900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-39282610950033320642018-01-28T11:45:20.478-05:002018-01-28T11:45:20.478-05:00Very dramatic. Great snippetVery dramatic. Great snippetNaomi Shawhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16693171140434692340noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-16249211274441604192018-01-28T11:04:40.424-05:002018-01-28T11:04:40.424-05:00You've written great tension into this scene. ...You've written great tension into this scene. Wonderful premise for this story!Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-10499437454785445512018-01-28T11:02:42.638-05:002018-01-28T11:02:42.638-05:00A dramatic beginning! Interesting snippet...A dramatic beginning! Interesting snippet...Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10092079715013925609noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-72216880351066558662018-01-28T10:09:08.741-05:002018-01-28T10:09:08.741-05:00Not a good place to be. Not a good place to be. Aurora Springerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10368905407459425208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-43021332999265135702018-01-28T02:05:50.398-05:002018-01-28T02:05:50.398-05:00A very tense scene. I can't imagine what he mu...A very tense scene. I can't imagine what he must feel.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com