tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post4452447829068859752..comments2024-03-28T15:40:58.553-04:00Comments on Hope. Dreams. Life... Love: Weekend Writing Warriors: Snakebite on the ButtElaine Cantrellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comBlogger32125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-44754785322076921962013-03-16T18:57:57.216-04:002013-03-16T18:57:57.216-04:00LOL! I love that you even address this issue, but ...LOL! I love that you even address this issue, but that you do it with such humor is awesome!Sarah Ballancehttp://sarahballance.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-82221591095796427572013-03-04T10:23:45.197-05:002013-03-04T10:23:45.197-05:00I'm massively frightened by snakes. What an aw...I'm massively frightened by snakes. What an awesome setting for a romantic adventure!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-91273589384239004552013-03-04T04:45:48.805-05:002013-03-04T04:45:48.805-05:00Oh, I really like this excerpt. It's cute and ...Oh, I really like this excerpt. It's cute and funny. :) Majankahttp://majankaverstraete.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-43720281122754354522013-03-04T04:05:49.620-05:002013-03-04T04:05:49.620-05:00Love how the heroine's thoughts were amusing, ...Love how the heroine's thoughts were amusing, despite her dire situation. Nice touch.Clare Davidsonhttp://www.claredavidson.com/blog/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-3288322913650735632013-03-03T21:51:32.443-05:002013-03-03T21:51:32.443-05:00The last line made me laugh. I enjoyed reading abo...The last line made me laugh. I enjoyed reading about her thoughts, nice 8.Frank Fisherhttp://www.frankmfisher.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-20275580674065547012013-03-03T20:18:27.055-05:002013-03-03T20:18:27.055-05:00I like how her thoughts turn to one snake to anoth...I like how her thoughts turn to one snake to another in just the blink of an eye. Yikes, I think I'd we tmyself rather than go out in the dark!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-72133080835901794342013-03-03T20:12:00.466-05:002013-03-03T20:12:00.466-05:00Oh, funny, but very real concern. Love your snippe...Oh, funny, but very real concern. Love your snippet for telling us so much in so few words.<br /><br /><br />Virginia Kellyhttp://virginiakelly.netnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-17062477265351096572013-03-03T19:00:24.011-05:002013-03-03T19:00:24.011-05:00Love this! Dying of snakebite versus dying of emb...Love this! Dying of snakebite versus dying of embarrassment. There's a tough choice! :DSarah Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13265589529909793312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-68316477327412795102013-03-03T17:55:52.418-05:002013-03-03T17:55:52.418-05:00Oh, no, no. I would hate to be stuck in a rainfore...Oh, no, no. I would hate to be stuck in a rainforest. Humidity does awful things to my hair, and the spiders are huge! *shivers* But yes, the snakes would also creep me out. I've only had to deal with garden snakes and even then, I squealed like the girl that I am :)<br />I really enjoyed this. I already get a sense of her personality within this short snippet. I can't wait to read more :)meryvamphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07233468177700177135noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-14620627753794272352013-03-03T16:58:58.274-05:002013-03-03T16:58:58.274-05:00Oh, funny and not funny at the same time! Thanks f...Oh, funny and not funny at the same time! Thanks for sharing this bit.Owlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-19524563080223659102013-03-03T15:26:50.048-05:002013-03-03T15:26:50.048-05:00Great snippet. Loved her last thought. I would hav...Great snippet. Loved her last thought. I would have been worried about giant spiders myself. I hope you post more of this. I want to see what kind of trouble she's going to get into.Cindy Carrollhttp://www.cindycarroll.com/blognoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-6063946189831339392013-03-03T14:36:54.096-05:002013-03-03T14:36:54.096-05:00Yes, yes, they do. Fun snippet, Elaine. :)Yes, yes, they do. Fun snippet, Elaine. :)Siobhan Muirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00595776353171184107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-87678585681994732272013-03-03T14:07:22.437-05:002013-03-03T14:07:22.437-05:00Had to grin at this one.Had to grin at this one.Sue Ann Bowlinghttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17692320238497263942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-5010274107628525352013-03-03T13:58:05.714-05:002013-03-03T13:58:05.714-05:00OK MY worst fear - snakes! I totally sympathize wi...OK MY worst fear - snakes! I totally sympathize with your character...excellent excerpt!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-53510628465688282452013-03-03T13:52:29.124-05:002013-03-03T13:52:29.124-05:00the outdoors ain't always so great lol - exce...the outdoors ain't always so great lol - excellent descriptionssuehttp://sassyspeaks.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-11326819131131435832013-03-03T13:26:32.772-05:002013-03-03T13:26:32.772-05:00I loved the Yuck, yuck, she'd rather die. Too ...I loved the Yuck, yuck, she'd rather die. Too funny and very natural. Great scene. HistorySleuthhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05502098938801373264noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-17863587797027574402013-03-03T13:09:21.430-05:002013-03-03T13:09:21.430-05:00So much fun, I love it!So much fun, I love it!DasNukhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06513945470399592454noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-62922909459632184512013-03-03T12:41:58.684-05:002013-03-03T12:41:58.684-05:00Boas certainly do squeeze you to death, so why...?...Boas certainly do squeeze you to death, so why...? There's a lot of story in these 8 sentences. Really effective hook! Super!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-85584940225206011142013-03-03T12:16:27.800-05:002013-03-03T12:16:27.800-05:00There's more here than meets the eye... Great ...There's more here than meets the eye... Great 8!Catherine Cavendishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17449903323633317080noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-27590943221444402602013-03-03T12:01:17.068-05:002013-03-03T12:01:17.068-05:00I can just imagine the snake bite on the butt! Go...I can just imagine the snake bite on the butt! Good imagery and leaves me wanting to know more.Debbie D. https://www.blogger.com/profile/13153118405565035071noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-76652422731201532712013-03-03T11:34:06.906-05:002013-03-03T11:34:06.906-05:00Well described scene!Well described scene!gemma parkeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06275261646534324484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-53314939519797022592013-03-03T11:07:20.120-05:002013-03-03T11:07:20.120-05:00Oh, fun! Love this look into her thoughts!Oh, fun! Love this look into her thoughts!Nanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08809913527142033733noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-90418669163814927382013-03-03T11:05:10.872-05:002013-03-03T11:05:10.872-05:00Great scene, and one we can all relate to!Great scene, and one we can all relate to!Paula Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10040623635956769807noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-78136773687550314022013-03-03T10:59:22.066-05:002013-03-03T10:59:22.066-05:00Elaine,
I had to chuckle. What a wonderful scene....Elaine,<br /><br />I had to chuckle. What a wonderful scene. We have the character's fear of the unknown, her possible attraction to the hero, and a wee bit of humor, too. Loved it. Karen Michelle Nutthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04083893569523248900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-39204514955437667462013-03-03T10:42:35.002-05:002013-03-03T10:42:35.002-05:00I love how the one snake fear is replaced with the...I love how the one snake fear is replaced with the other. She's right about the boas, they aren't called constrictors for nothing. Cute snippet.Katehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10261759171411084998noreply@blogger.com