tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post4851507109734897270..comments2024-03-28T21:33:06.181-04:00Comments on Hope. Dreams. Life... Love: Snippet Sunday and Weekend Writing WarriorsElaine Cantrellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-9955167188940997032014-05-15T13:55:38.375-04:002014-05-15T13:55:38.375-04:00Great scene. I take it he didn't notice the o...Great scene. I take it he didn't notice the other people when he came in? I am intrigued by what it is that he has to tell her...P.T.Wyanthttp://ptwyant.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-26372608037148673332014-05-12T11:01:00.805-04:002014-05-12T11:01:00.805-04:00Very intriguing...makes me wonder what the story b...Very intriguing...makes me wonder what the story behind it is.William Kendallhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00331324250821836822noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-5858883806626600012014-05-11T23:01:54.284-04:002014-05-11T23:01:54.284-04:00Definitely an intriguing snippet. Makes me wonder ...Definitely an intriguing snippet. Makes me wonder why the rest of them are staring at him like that--what do they see that he and she don't?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-60795119373020502362014-05-11T15:41:53.274-04:002014-05-11T15:41:53.274-04:00I really like this snippet--she's happy to see...I really like this snippet--she's happy to see him, he's clearly very sad/tense about news he has to give her, his family knows (?) something is wrong. It actually brought a tear to me eye.Karysa Fairehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09519776785650008126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-80170233187595777642014-05-11T15:37:29.157-04:002014-05-11T15:37:29.157-04:00Highly intriguing and can't wait to find out m...Highly intriguing and can't wait to find out more. Terrific snippet!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-4308750172189633542014-05-11T15:16:59.255-04:002014-05-11T15:16:59.255-04:00Very intense and really leaves me wondering - in a...Very intense and really leaves me wondering - in a good way. Nice snippet.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-33448158351962455552014-05-11T13:32:26.733-04:002014-05-11T13:32:26.733-04:00Sounds as if the news he has has somehow changed h...Sounds as if the news he has has somehow changed him.Sue Ann Bowlinghttp://homecomingbook.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-36417485139237079612014-05-11T12:46:37.569-04:002014-05-11T12:46:37.569-04:00I wonder what's happened? You painted a vivid ...I wonder what's happened? You painted a vivid scene and i can't wait to see where this is going!gemma parkeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06275261646534324484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-22424245620715951662014-05-11T12:01:34.414-04:002014-05-11T12:01:34.414-04:00Hmmm, I know he has something to say, but from you...Hmmm, I know <i>he</i> has something to say, but from your description it sounds like <i>they</i> know something about him, too!Botanisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12098709722475364465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-47389564338136129062014-05-11T12:00:12.910-04:002014-05-11T12:00:12.910-04:00Uh oh...this snippet feels ominous, like he isn...Uh oh...this snippet feels ominous, like he isn't the only one with bad news to tell?? Great job of delivering tension, Elaine. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-58570875345641546872014-05-11T10:30:20.766-04:002014-05-11T10:30:20.766-04:00Something is not quite right here., Elaine. She...Something is not quite right here., Elaine. She's joyous whens eeing him again yet in another room when he enters, sons and parents see something different. Maybe clarify. You have our interest.Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-741246796347081712014-05-11T08:50:11.410-04:002014-05-11T08:50:11.410-04:00Patricia asked the one question I had, and you ans...Patricia asked the one question I had, and you answered it, so I'll just say that the anticipation over his news is <i>killing me</i>, Elaine!Sarah Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13265589529909793312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-45027513196931997382014-05-11T08:23:28.964-04:002014-05-11T08:23:28.964-04:00They saw that something was wrong because he wasn&...They saw that something was wrong because he wasn't acting like he usually does. ILl work on that part to make it clear.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-38580706915843984752014-05-11T01:51:23.855-04:002014-05-11T01:51:23.855-04:00I'm wondering about the bad news. But I'm ...I'm wondering about the bad news. But I'm also curious about that phrase, "a man they halfway feared." Is he someone who rules his home with an iron fist? Or were you referring to their expressions of surprise?Patricia Kiyonohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14763838993363110626noreply@blogger.com