tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post5623435339726007619..comments2024-03-28T15:40:58.553-04:00Comments on Hope. Dreams. Life... Love: Weekend Writing Warriors and Sunday Snippet.Elaine Cantrellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-8385378295826383202014-12-04T20:17:46.417-05:002014-12-04T20:17:46.417-05:00This comment has been removed by the author.JTsuruokahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05173187123835069767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-31552119979725971442014-12-04T20:16:49.196-05:002014-12-04T20:16:49.196-05:00Nice, sharp dialogue. Nice, sharp dialogue. JTsuruokahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05173187123835069767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-59132664692395282502014-12-01T01:50:34.033-05:002014-12-01T01:50:34.033-05:00Great tension and conflict via crisp dialogue. I l...Great tension and conflict via crisp dialogue. I love her strength that shines through. Great 8!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08242815035131152082noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-86367771406346357182014-11-30T15:02:41.834-05:002014-11-30T15:02:41.834-05:00I have a feeling Jason will regret more things tha...I have a feeling Jason will regret more things than she will. Great snippet!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-87534761234355945022014-11-30T13:52:29.323-05:002014-11-30T13:52:29.323-05:00I love the interplay between all of them. Feather...I love the interplay between all of them. Feathers are probably about to start flying!Carrie-Annehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05810154378449825641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-66468174539843193752014-11-30T11:48:20.858-05:002014-11-30T11:48:20.858-05:00oooh, a lot of emotions flying every where, I like...oooh, a lot of emotions flying every where, I like that! :-)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09922888671399516573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-90552512796575670992014-11-30T10:23:38.341-05:002014-11-30T10:23:38.341-05:00YIKES! Big conflict at the get-go. Super eight, El...YIKES! Big conflict at the get-go. Super eight, Elaine.Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-64750627341390080902014-11-30T08:58:42.921-05:002014-11-30T08:58:42.921-05:00I've made my choice! :D
Oh, you give good ten...I've made <i>my</i> choice! :D<br /><br />Oh, you give good tension, Elaine! Sarah Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13265589529909793312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-79865713095416883942014-11-30T05:32:25.323-05:002014-11-30T05:32:25.323-05:00Intense scene. Wonder whether she lets him leave.Intense scene. Wonder whether she lets him leave.Iris Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07282988971025667976noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-18221872519378961692014-11-30T02:18:24.253-05:002014-11-30T02:18:24.253-05:00I like her! She's not afraid to take control ...I like her! She's not afraid to take control and set (and enforce) limits. P.T.Wyanthttp://ptwyant.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-29887889371461036892014-11-30T01:57:57.359-05:002014-11-30T01:57:57.359-05:00Vivid, Elaine. I wonder is she will regret it? I h...Vivid, Elaine. I wonder is she will regret it? I haven't quite got a bead on their characters, yet. :-) Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-69246367772417351282014-11-29T22:50:19.708-05:002014-11-29T22:50:19.708-05:00Great snippet. :)Great snippet. :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08486824276807575493noreply@blogger.com