tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post6561637067694834871..comments2024-03-28T19:25:36.859-04:00Comments on Hope. Dreams. Life... Love: Weekend Writing WarriorsElaine Cantrellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-12576929869850929082021-06-20T20:47:42.807-04:002021-06-20T20:47:42.807-04:00That's rough. Not only is he feeling unsure ab...That's rough. Not only is he feeling unsure about himself, now his brother has to ask Peyton out. Kate Hillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06508799810759533960noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-57891769915135210612021-06-20T19:48:41.259-04:002021-06-20T19:48:41.259-04:00Well, maybe a little jealousy will get Jake moving...Well, maybe a little jealousy will get Jake moving! :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-17810659593569323442021-06-20T16:25:05.929-04:002021-06-20T16:25:05.929-04:00Great job of showing Jake's feelings rather th...Great job of showing Jake's feelings rather than just telling us.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-63255264406298392582021-06-20T13:27:45.005-04:002021-06-20T13:27:45.005-04:00Oh - a rival for the woman he can't have! You ...Oh - a rival for the woman he can't have! You showed his frustration well. Aurora Springerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10368905407459425208noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-22575520086290951972021-06-20T11:12:05.589-04:002021-06-20T11:12:05.589-04:00Oh dear, poor Jake! I really feel for him...great ...Oh dear, poor Jake! I really feel for him...great snippet, full of emotion.Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-3790844837411881372021-06-20T11:03:55.488-04:002021-06-20T11:03:55.488-04:00Oh, man, that has to hurt like hell. I only hope P...Oh, man, that has to hurt like hell. I only hope Peyton has to wash her hair or something. Jake deserves her. Great snippet! Tweeted.Jennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10308158251486924808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-17918919220157079732021-06-20T10:54:15.954-04:002021-06-20T10:54:15.954-04:00I agree! You wrote Jake's inner turmoil very w...I agree! You wrote Jake's inner turmoil very well! I felt it, too. Now, we'll see what Peyton says.Jessica E. Subjecthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14356934162311768234noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-69479309281478048542021-06-20T09:28:49.114-04:002021-06-20T09:28:49.114-04:00Ouch. I could feel Jake's anguish.Ouch. I could feel Jake's anguish.Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.com