tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post6759873230552472027..comments2024-03-29T09:45:00.372-04:00Comments on Hope. Dreams. Life... Love: Saturday Sample: Rest Thy HeadElaine Cantrellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-87588105919817678672015-04-06T00:39:11.861-04:002015-04-06T00:39:11.861-04:00Good stuff, emotional and clear. You might conside...Good stuff, emotional and clear. You might consider ditching the line about hesitating. The passage in which she's going over it all in her head suggests that she takes a moment to consider her answer before speaking-- and that she already knew what she was going to say but felt compelled to try and talk herself out of it.JTsuruokahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05173187123835069767noreply@blogger.com