tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post7021268627046021645..comments2024-03-28T10:57:32.426-04:00Comments on Hope. Dreams. Life... Love: Snippet Sunday and Weekend Writing WarriorsElaine Cantrellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-25365594671448321642014-06-24T23:51:06.825-04:002014-06-24T23:51:06.825-04:00Wow, great scene, Elaine. I like the emotional tur...Wow, great scene, Elaine. I like the emotional turmoil. I'm with him. And I'm curious to learn why she'd not be able to accept the boy and love him. Children never have a say in who their parents are. Wonderful premise!Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-77622393651633036702014-06-23T18:04:34.870-04:002014-06-23T18:04:34.870-04:00You definitely bring the immediacy of the problem ...You definitely bring the immediacy of the problem out... Very effective scene.JTsuruokahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05173187123835069767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-2281767101346593572014-06-23T12:58:39.678-04:002014-06-23T12:58:39.678-04:00Wow. Just, wow.Wow. Just, wow.Karysa Fairehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09519776785650008126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-65341747755174849912014-06-23T02:41:37.809-04:002014-06-23T02:41:37.809-04:00I realize it's a bad situation and she's s...I realize it's a bad situation and she's shell shocked, but she's got to give him credit for trying to do the right thing. <br /><br />Great snippet, can't wait to find out where you take this story.Jess Schirahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04930756756945812094noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-49543921329499976742014-06-22T23:41:38.035-04:002014-06-22T23:41:38.035-04:00Oh goodness, I hope she lets him be good to his ch...Oh goodness, I hope she lets him be good to his child. It's not the child's fault. Very tough situation here...Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05551671528722336812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-46677405672171368092014-06-22T16:53:19.333-04:002014-06-22T16:53:19.333-04:00Victoria Davenport, I can't find your sentence...Victoria Davenport, I can't find your sentences if you did them. I'm so sorry.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-32193328502855082932014-06-22T16:39:33.639-04:002014-06-22T16:39:33.639-04:00I think he's trying to be responsible, but I s...I think he's trying to be responsible, but I sure wonder what kind of stepmother she'll make.Sue Ann Bowlinghttp://homecomingbook.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-58917376827909396962014-06-22T14:17:33.619-04:002014-06-22T14:17:33.619-04:00Wow! Some really great, vivid emotions. I can feel...Wow! Some really great, vivid emotions. I can <b>feel</b>, from both of them. Great 8 :)Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07481361022996075084noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-82792136227979228822014-06-22T13:49:16.414-04:002014-06-22T13:49:16.414-04:00The crux of the matter is finally revealed. I love...The crux of the matter is finally revealed. I love this story and I'm eager to see it unfold.Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-55291713550323720962014-06-22T13:32:05.420-04:002014-06-22T13:32:05.420-04:00Thanks for the tip, Botanist.Thanks for the tip, Botanist.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-83561489913423912892014-06-22T13:11:35.633-04:002014-06-22T13:11:35.633-04:00Wow! The gamut of emotions for each of them is ama...Wow! The gamut of emotions for each of them is amazing. They have a lot to work through and now a little boy will be in the middle of it all. Great 8.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-58946601862200439802014-06-22T13:11:03.076-04:002014-06-22T13:11:03.076-04:00"There's more" - how much more can t..."There's more" - how much more can there be? Seems like one bombshell after another, this will be tough to get over!<br /><br />Just one minor suggestion, I think "There's more" should be on a new line. It's a different speaker from the start of the paragraph.Botanisthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12098709722475364465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-54253078448726841472014-06-22T11:40:18.763-04:002014-06-22T11:40:18.763-04:00Quite the intense situation and I admire him, for ...Quite the intense situation and I admire him, for not abandoning his son. I do understand her reactions though - really an excellent excerpt!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-37128181825777935572014-06-22T10:36:09.711-04:002014-06-22T10:36:09.711-04:00Oh my. Such a huge emotional blow and you handled ...Oh my. Such a huge emotional blow and you handled the impact well. The shock and horror and deep pain. Sarah Casshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03299866797067130767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-8039659623167647472014-06-22T10:35:54.175-04:002014-06-22T10:35:54.175-04:00Oh, this is tough for both of them. Good snippet, ...Oh, this is tough for both of them. Good snippet, Elaine.Siobhan Muirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00595776353171184107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-61507379059720072942014-06-22T09:05:29.299-04:002014-06-22T09:05:29.299-04:00I'm with both of them, hurting as each new rev...I'm with both of them, hurting as each new revelation widens the chasm between them. Fantastic eight!Gem Sivadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01233835029255570402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-72898835152063506592014-06-22T08:17:26.449-04:002014-06-22T08:17:26.449-04:00She's the main heroine?
I think they both hav...She's the main heroine?<br /><br />I think they both have a long way to go before this relationship is fixed!<br /><br />(Hooray! I can finally see your anti-spam codes! :D )Sarah Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13265589529909793312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-66165098445146154402014-06-22T02:37:27.561-04:002014-06-22T02:37:27.561-04:00Such devastating news! I can just imagine the gam...Such devastating news! I can just imagine the gamut of emotion that's flooding through her. Sorry I haven't been here lately to keep up with the story, but it sure held my interest.Debbie D. https://www.blogger.com/profile/13153118405565035071noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-55854491798742122882014-06-22T00:40:04.865-04:002014-06-22T00:40:04.865-04:00I think that if I was his wife I'd be wonderin...I think that if I was his wife I'd be wondering just how much of a one night stand this was... Great emotion in this!P.T.Wyanthttp://ptwyant.comnoreply@blogger.com