tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post709024692455383715..comments2024-03-29T09:45:00.372-04:00Comments on Hope. Dreams. Life... Love: Weekend Writing Warriors: You Whipped HimElaine Cantrellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comBlogger15125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-559051544482598332013-08-10T17:53:51.668-04:002013-08-10T17:53:51.668-04:00Ouch.Ouch.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-79339574519663228252013-08-04T22:08:55.298-04:002013-08-04T22:08:55.298-04:00Glad it wasn't too bad for the prince...but st...Glad it wasn't too bad for the prince...but still! Flogging? Eep! Great 8!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08920349957061612653noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-66232515987739844672013-08-04T17:19:01.252-04:002013-08-04T17:19:01.252-04:00Damnation with the flogging and scars on the good ...Damnation with the flogging and scars on the good prince. So what happens next?Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-65005783960146920412013-08-04T17:09:27.973-04:002013-08-04T17:09:27.973-04:00It probably didn't feel minimal to poor Alan! ...It probably didn't feel minimal to poor Alan! It seems like the king might have some punishment in store for this breach of etiquette.Carrie-Annehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05810154378449825641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-48060680732430349312013-08-04T17:07:44.972-04:002013-08-04T17:07:44.972-04:00What a beautiful book trailer video, Elaine! Compe...What a beautiful book trailer video, Elaine! Compelling :)<br /><br />You use great descriptive words, and I was able to envision Alan turning slowly, with no animation. Like the whipping only scarred his body and not his mind. Like he didn't care what his father, the king, thought or felt ... like nothing can touch him.<br /><br />Great 8!Susan Schilerhttp://teamfamilyonline.com/moonlight-escape-part-7-2/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-16409875626521047052013-08-04T16:26:35.835-04:002013-08-04T16:26:35.835-04:00The keeper beat the prince? Isn't that like co...The keeper beat the prince? Isn't that like committing suicide?<br /><br />Good snippet and great coverKayci Morganhttp://www.kaycimorgan.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-72841163577648048782013-08-04T16:24:26.796-04:002013-08-04T16:24:26.796-04:00so the king put his son in jail but didn't wan...so the king put his son in jail but didn't want him beaten? and didn't convey his wishes? miscommunication or someone's in deep shit!suehttp://sassyspeaks.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-49492483214125987782013-08-04T14:20:21.118-04:002013-08-04T14:20:21.118-04:00Hmm, it'll be interesting to see how this play...Hmm, it'll be interesting to see how this plays out. Nice eight.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05551671528722336812noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-13061162275875268682013-08-04T13:47:17.857-04:002013-08-04T13:47:17.857-04:00I don't like any of them except the prince him...I don't like any of them except the prince himself! Really engrossed in this story, can't wait for more. Great snippet.Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-2882790388501115432013-08-04T12:23:34.087-04:002013-08-04T12:23:34.087-04:00Well if he whipped my son i would be gunning for h...Well if he whipped my son i would be gunning for him! But what did the king expect?gemma parkeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06275261646534324484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-25446040949256201302013-08-04T11:45:40.008-04:002013-08-04T11:45:40.008-04:00I'm thinking the King is not happy about this....I'm thinking the King is not happy about this. I really hope he's not. Fingers crossed. :)S.J. Mayleehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00071906614814860932noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-91940202030342659752013-08-04T10:35:28.389-04:002013-08-04T10:35:28.389-04:00So cold--the keeper. But he sure was nervous answ...So cold--the keeper. But he sure was nervous answering for the scars. I really didn't like the King much at this point. :-) <br /><br />Nice 8, Elaine! Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-28572281061756884382013-08-04T10:12:38.883-04:002013-08-04T10:12:38.883-04:00I want more! The King seemed stunned by the floggi...I want more! The King seemed stunned by the flogging. I want to know what happens next!Maggiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08965434230302395649noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-26734543390342708552013-08-04T09:36:51.875-04:002013-08-04T09:36:51.875-04:00Elaine, I really like this story. Great job!Elaine, I really like this story. Great job!A.S. Fenichelhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15188528705441184803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-50563514504510562112013-08-04T09:25:15.721-04:002013-08-04T09:25:15.721-04:00oohh now what?! The king seemed friendly with the ...oohh now what?! The king seemed friendly with the keeper, but now I get the sense that the king didn't expect him to whip Alan. Dang, every week I'm disappointed that the excerpt is so short :)Owlladyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12989152304836466124noreply@blogger.com