tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post7533351111821433254..comments2024-03-28T10:57:32.426-04:00Comments on Hope. Dreams. Life... Love: Snippet Sunday and Weekend Writing WarriorsElaine Cantrellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-12730265481436108242014-05-31T08:36:44.714-04:002014-05-31T08:36:44.714-04:00Oh that's not what you would expect to hear fr...Oh that's not what you would expect to hear from your husband. <br />Now so many things can happen. Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13346034896296813841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-54894300797648498742014-05-26T22:53:56.162-04:002014-05-26T22:53:56.162-04:00Oh my, quite a revelation. I'm certainly intri...Oh my, quite a revelation. I'm certainly intrigued by what his wife has to say.Chelle Corderohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15412268726863698528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-50198940449269288572014-05-26T03:10:56.629-04:002014-05-26T03:10:56.629-04:00Ouch. Poor... everyone. :-( Really well done.Ouch. Poor... everyone. :-( Really well done.Karysa Fairehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09519776785650008126noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-76741947693295933302014-05-26T01:28:15.368-04:002014-05-26T01:28:15.368-04:00I think it's working. You've got strong di...I think it's working. You've got strong dialogue and have ratcheted up the tension. JTsuruokahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05173187123835069767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-55520878191173186662014-05-25T22:30:24.176-04:002014-05-25T22:30:24.176-04:00Just how understanding can a wife be? You've g...Just how understanding can a wife be? You've got us hanging here. Is it Sunday yet? Terrific, Elaine.Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-35857995778812570142014-05-25T21:23:27.660-04:002014-05-25T21:23:27.660-04:00Sue Ann, the boy is seven, and they've been ma...Sue Ann, the boy is seven, and they've been married for ten years.Elaine Cantrellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-24860757445432645502014-05-25T20:55:44.864-04:002014-05-25T20:55:44.864-04:00How old is the child compared to his marriage?How old is the child compared to his marriage?Sue Ann Bowlinghttp://homecomingbook.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-66332450025303586472014-05-25T18:34:26.235-04:002014-05-25T18:34:26.235-04:00Oh there's a "what happens next??" m...Oh there's a "what happens next??" moment if I ever saw one! Strong excerpt, Elaine. Cliffhanger! Marciahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07092928480361131154noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-21451858023489383322014-05-25T16:16:53.694-04:002014-05-25T16:16:53.694-04:00Nice. I'm relieved it's not something terr...Nice. I'm relieved it's not something terrible. Life altering, yes, but possibly hopeful. Like everyone else, I can't wait to see her response.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-87188970641473949012014-05-25T14:59:22.882-04:002014-05-25T14:59:22.882-04:00Oh, that's a helluva bombshell. Great snippet,...Oh, that's a helluva bombshell. Great snippet, Elaine. I think it flows pretty well as is.Siobhan Muirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00595776353171184107noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-86461134361835422882014-05-25T12:13:18.712-04:002014-05-25T12:13:18.712-04:00No wonder he's been afraid that this could bri...No wonder he's been afraid that this could bring his world crashing down. I'm looking forward to her reaction. P.T.Wyanthttp://ptwyant.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-70378401383848012272014-05-25T12:07:02.151-04:002014-05-25T12:07:02.151-04:00Wow! Life changing, indeed! Nicely done, Elaine. I...Wow! Life changing, indeed! Nicely done, Elaine. I really want to know more!Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-52329983898377853702014-05-25T11:42:28.883-04:002014-05-25T11:42:28.883-04:00Ah, can't wait for the backstory on this...a v...Ah, can't wait for the backstory on this...a very tense moment for them. Excellent excerpt!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-550670272796218552014-05-25T11:27:37.908-04:002014-05-25T11:27:37.908-04:00Still a lot of tensions here. Revelations always ...Still a lot of tensions here. Revelations always have reactions. Can't wait for that. Simply but beautifully written.Jennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10308158251486924808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-9451275296498357912014-05-25T09:07:22.863-04:002014-05-25T09:07:22.863-04:00Once he accepts it himself, he can answer with pri...Once he accepts it himself, he can answer with pride, "He's my son!"<br />Well done.FCEtierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14199098303138353894noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-1940395291499930202014-05-25T08:30:02.015-04:002014-05-25T08:30:02.015-04:00wow! now we need to know the reaction to such reve...wow! now we need to know the reaction to such revelation! great work!Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09922888671399516573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-56142925147017075382014-05-25T06:42:38.720-04:002014-05-25T06:42:38.720-04:00Brilliantly written. Simple,very realistic dialogu...Brilliantly written. Simple,very realistic dialogue. The answer he gives his wife explains the white noise in his head. Gem Sivadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01233835029255570402noreply@blogger.com