tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post8445784595187625888..comments2024-03-28T21:33:06.181-04:00Comments on Hope. Dreams. Life... Love: Snippet Sunday and Weekend Writing WarriorsElaine Cantrellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-76780575647346882872015-01-20T22:33:00.605-05:002015-01-20T22:33:00.605-05:00Awe, very sad, but Caleb had better get on it! Awe, very sad, but Caleb had better get on it! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09436256293259964125noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-58508024812805081802015-01-19T18:50:45.176-05:002015-01-19T18:50:45.176-05:00It's not too much to ask. Don't give up, C...It's not too much to ask. Don't give up, Caleb! Fight for her!Kate Warrenhttp://www.thekatewarren.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-60438971556193303672015-01-19T05:39:36.808-05:002015-01-19T05:39:36.808-05:00Lovely paragraph. Don't we all want a little b...Lovely paragraph. Don't we all want a little bit of that?Iris Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07282988971025667976noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-31620172838708093922015-01-18T23:03:43.145-05:002015-01-18T23:03:43.145-05:00Awww,I like him so much and the plinking rain was ...Awww,I like him so much and the plinking rain was a perfect accompaniment to his thoughts...have really been enjoying this story. Another great 8! I want more :-)Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-23366326220102780222015-01-18T22:02:48.187-05:002015-01-18T22:02:48.187-05:00Hooked. Can't wait to see if things work out.Hooked. Can't wait to see if things work out.Ceciliahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07076648307785084672noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-90868213792298787602015-01-18T21:53:10.968-05:002015-01-18T21:53:10.968-05:00That's a really poignant snippet. I feel for ...That's a really poignant snippet. I feel for him so much.Carrie-Annehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05810154378449825641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-11870769521084298272015-01-18T21:04:28.662-05:002015-01-18T21:04:28.662-05:00Aww, poor guy. Definitely a hug is what the doctor...Aww, poor guy. Definitely a hug is what the doctor needs to prescribe him.Claire Gillianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10857484329212732638noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-2607171621829303292015-01-18T20:53:19.003-05:002015-01-18T20:53:19.003-05:00Nice piece of introspection. The dripping is an ef...Nice piece of introspection. The dripping is an effective image.JTsuruokahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05173187123835069767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-73475588887919080502015-01-18T20:45:41.678-05:002015-01-18T20:45:41.678-05:00I hope he gets what he wants. He sounds lonely and...I hope he gets what he wants. He sounds lonely and frightened. He sure needs a hug and someone to love him.Gem Sivadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01233835029255570402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-59121605667668204292015-01-18T20:40:05.305-05:002015-01-18T20:40:05.305-05:00Poor thing. I hope things work out soon. Poor thing. I hope things work out soon. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08486824276807575493noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-39732153533286066772015-01-18T13:07:35.530-05:002015-01-18T13:07:35.530-05:00I think Teresa is right about the word "plink...I think Teresa is right about the word "plink". Good snippet, Elaine. :)Siobhan Muirhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13653107467839760917noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-54127151398386678462015-01-18T08:46:36.306-05:002015-01-18T08:46:36.306-05:00Oh, Elaine, this is just heartbreaking!
He must g...Oh, Elaine, this is just heartbreaking!<br /><br />He must get her back! And to echo Teresa (sort of), where can we find the rest of this? We need to read it all!Sarah Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13265589529909793312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-56780190754199483032015-01-18T08:21:59.054-05:002015-01-18T08:21:59.054-05:00Aw, no it's not too much to ask! I want to giv...Aw, no it's not too much to ask! I want to give him a big hug!gemma parkeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06275261646534324484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-58175146579037019512015-01-18T01:33:27.050-05:002015-01-18T01:33:27.050-05:00I feel so bad for him. Almost had it all... But ...I feel so bad for him. Almost had it all... But I'm hooked. I think he's going to get it back. :-) Is this on Amazon?<br /><br />I think that each plink should be italicized, or did I recall that wrong? I'm pretty sure that words that imitate sounds are italicized.<br /><br />If you put commas between the plinks, you easily stay in the 8 sentence range. :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-40803173485395493272015-01-18T01:27:29.867-05:002015-01-18T01:27:29.867-05:00Oh it's not too much to ask. He definitely nee...Oh it's not too much to ask. He definitely needs a hug. <br /><br />The water dripping would drive me crazy. lol But he was beyond caring. Great imagery.Karen Michelle Nutthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04083893569523248900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-28219313947656466832015-01-18T01:10:39.806-05:002015-01-18T01:10:39.806-05:00What do you mean, "one more excerpt"! Yo...What do you mean, "one more excerpt"! You can't quit now!<br /><br />Great snippet -- I love the water dripping. Does he even really notice it? (I know he's watching it, but is it registering at all?)P.T.Wyanthttp://ptwyant.comnoreply@blogger.com