tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post4185854695495844145..comments2024-03-28T14:04:31.418-04:00Comments on Hope. Dreams. Life... Love: Snippet Sunday and Weekend Writing WarriorsElaine Cantrellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-28779416706207549472015-03-31T17:00:10.296-04:002015-03-31T17:00:10.296-04:00I love the phrase "dancing on the fringes of ...I love the phrase "dancing on the fringes of her mind"...really an excellent excerpt!Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-32683752930559752922015-03-30T05:51:19.041-04:002015-03-30T05:51:19.041-04:00Nice snippet this week, Elaine.Nice snippet this week, Elaine.Iris Bhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07282988971025667976noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-54966309289179023432015-03-30T01:21:37.365-04:002015-03-30T01:21:37.365-04:00Very "real" feel to this snippet, especi...Very "real" feel to this snippet, especially the "hey."P.T.Wyanthttp://ptwyant.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-273120993966813852015-03-30T01:06:33.475-04:002015-03-30T01:06:33.475-04:00So caught off guard, great job showing that.So caught off guard, great job showing that.Chelle Corderohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15412268726863698528noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-2637819552665730222015-03-29T23:51:46.212-04:002015-03-29T23:51:46.212-04:00lol-- I could see me being that tongue tied. Great...lol-- I could see me being that tongue tied. Great snippet!!Karen Michelle Nutthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04083893569523248900noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-63079135802452056712015-03-29T20:12:09.511-04:002015-03-29T20:12:09.511-04:00Really conveys he struggle. Excellent! Thanks for ...Really conveys he struggle. Excellent! Thanks for sharing. Denisea Kampehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16438952306934151803noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-71322299689045068412015-03-29T17:55:50.107-04:002015-03-29T17:55:50.107-04:00It's so easy to relate to her feelings. Who w...It's so easy to relate to her feelings. Who wouldn't have a similar reaction in that situation?Carrie-Annehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05810154378449825641noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-24278698811978356272015-03-29T16:55:17.327-04:002015-03-29T16:55:17.327-04:00That voice from behind is a great device, isn'...That voice from behind is a great device, isn't it? We've all had that happen to us & know all the reactions it can cause. Good snippet.JTsuruokahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05173187123835069767noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-16119219753770053532015-03-29T11:19:49.580-04:002015-03-29T11:19:49.580-04:00I would probably do the same. Have no words to say...I would probably do the same. Have no words to say lol. Great snippet, showed true emotion.Ceciliahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07076648307785084672noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-53984326387423501452015-03-29T10:34:05.071-04:002015-03-29T10:34:05.071-04:00I agree. Hey is just fine but oh the turmoil that ...I agree. Hey is just fine but oh the turmoil that precedes the hey. And now what happens. More to follow. Yum to your writing, Elaine.Charmaine Gordonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15236373312231763983noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-46791557037850901942015-03-29T07:43:20.563-04:002015-03-29T07:43:20.563-04:00"Hey" works! :D
I love her inner turmoi..."Hey" works! :D<br /><br />I love her inner turmoil, Elaine. This is such a great story.Sarah Whttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13265589529909793312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-75017424121942900052015-03-29T04:51:21.838-04:002015-03-29T04:51:21.838-04:00Great character building, we're left in no dou...Great character building, we're left in no doubt of the effect he's having on her! Loved it.gemma parkeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06275261646534324484noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-5765733932584284392015-03-29T02:52:10.763-04:002015-03-29T02:52:10.763-04:00Hey is a pretty safe choice when you are so shocke...Hey is a pretty safe choice when you are so shocked you can't speak. Lindahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13346034896296813841noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-50436009910236085592015-03-29T01:17:13.930-04:002015-03-29T01:17:13.930-04:00Perfect bit of character building, Elaine. I love ...Perfect bit of character building, Elaine. I love that her tongue was "stayed" and that she finally got out one word; "Hey". Nice :-)Teresa Cypherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08940430996766842518noreply@blogger.com