tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post7758418558166487339..comments2024-03-28T05:45:29.339-04:00Comments on Hope. Dreams. Life... Love: Saturday Sample and Weekend Writing WarriorsElaine Cantrellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05668294337075373288noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-2741587888586083302021-05-03T07:00:43.091-04:002021-05-03T07:00:43.091-04:00Interesting to see the relationship from Brad'...Interesting to see the relationship from Brad's point of view. I can see so much conflict ahead.Jessica E. Subjecthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14356934162311768234noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-37350433205595716082021-05-03T04:50:01.151-04:002021-05-03T04:50:01.151-04:00I feel sorry for the guy when (if?) he finds out h...I feel sorry for the guy when (if?) he finds out he's just an investigation target - initiated by his grandfather, no less.E.D. Martinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06919218250424892502noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-88372166756497614742021-05-02T17:36:59.407-04:002021-05-02T17:36:59.407-04:00First, I like how he has someone verify his collec...First, I like how he has someone verify his collection count. My father-in-law used to count the offering along with someone else. Never alone. Not sure about other denominations, but the minister rarely counts the offering. Maybe in small congregations?<br /><br />Love the matchmaking friend. Diane Burtonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03754105332297068271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-86438520838546937612021-05-02T16:17:43.390-04:002021-05-02T16:17:43.390-04:00I like how he comes up with a reasonable, if perha...I like how he comes up with a reasonable, if perhaps somewhat self-serving, explanation for a visit. Since there's no sign (yet) he's a crook, I'm rooting for him.<br /><br />My son's wife lived in Japan for 6 or 7 years while growing up but feels like she doesn't know enough Japanese to carry on a conversation -- she gets mixed up with Chinese. Difficult language, according to Viv.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-54376156812117337332021-05-02T12:19:59.979-04:002021-05-02T12:19:59.979-04:00Nice complication set up right from the beginning....Nice complication set up right from the beginning. Lots of questions and depth in this snippet. I'm all in!Nancy Gideonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07493107610530282642noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-55165779492805869642021-05-02T10:25:04.695-04:002021-05-02T10:25:04.695-04:00I'm almost wondering if Mr. Silver is setting ...I'm almost wondering if Mr. Silver is setting up Brittany and Brad. Is he actually playing matchmaker? Loving this story!Jennahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10308158251486924808noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-43459121052255212012021-05-02T09:57:11.040-04:002021-05-02T09:57:11.040-04:00Interesting story set up. Got me wondering if Mr. ...Interesting story set up. Got me wondering if Mr. Silver (not Reverend Silver) is trustworthy. Fun snippet.Shari Elderhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03687408194572664044noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8565893280908397886.post-40303579585243627132021-05-02T09:56:07.716-04:002021-05-02T09:56:07.716-04:00I foresee hurt feelings ahead. An interesting plot...I foresee hurt feelings ahead. An interesting plot, with twists and turns, as the snippet foreshadows. Great excerpt.Veronica Scotthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04732940088047026021noreply@blogger.com