Saturday, May 21, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

This excerpt is from A New Dream which is available at http://www.astraeapress.com



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Matt hauled the steering wheel to correct the slide, but it was
useless. The car turned around once more and skidded backwards
for a short distance before it charged off the road. It jumped a steep
ditch and went airborne. All Matt could see was a blur of trees and
darkness as the car careened into the woods. It made a lazy turn in
the air and came to rest bottom side up.

The last thing he remembered was the sound of Stacey's screams.


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17 comments:

  1. UnknownMay 22, 2011 at 12:59 AM

    Great Video and strong six. I assume Stacey is the loose end. :)

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  2. Patricia PrestonMay 22, 2011 at 8:53 AM

    Great description and very tense!

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  3. Elaine CantrellMay 22, 2011 at 9:10 AM

    Ginger, how ever did you guess?
    Patricia, thanks so much. I wish I could have had more than six sentences. The scene started with a romantic moonlight drive and ended with tragedy.

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  4. Carolyn RosewoodMay 22, 2011 at 10:30 AM

    Suspensful!

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  5. Susanna FraserMay 22, 2011 at 10:33 AM

    Powerful six!

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  6. bglashbrooksMay 22, 2011 at 10:44 AM

    Very action-oriented six; makes me want to know what happens next! Great six!

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  7. Viviane BrentanosMay 22, 2011 at 10:58 AM

    Nice drama unfolding, here.

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  8. Chrystalla ThomaMay 22, 2011 at 11:49 AM

    Yikes poor people! I wonder if she survives... Great six!

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  9. KaryMay 22, 2011 at 12:04 PM

    Nail-bitting. Great six. I hope everyone survives intact.

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  10. AnonymousMay 22, 2011 at 2:11 PM

    I could definitely feel this accident. Nice description.

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  11. Jessica KnaussMay 22, 2011 at 2:45 PM

    You don't need any more sentences. This is very powerful.

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  12. Felicia RogersMay 22, 2011 at 2:49 PM

    Nicely done. Very suspenseful.

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  13. Sandra NachlingerMay 22, 2011 at 4:51 PM

    Yikes! Talk about a cliff hanger! Great action.
    My six sentences are here: http://iousex.blogspot.com

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  14. Elisa DaneMay 22, 2011 at 6:12 PM

    Great six! I'm hooked already :)

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  15. LindsayMay 23, 2011 at 1:08 AM

    Love the six.

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  16. MegMay 23, 2011 at 10:16 PM

    Wow. Great six!

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  17. Alanna CocaMay 25, 2011 at 2:47 PM

    Very powerful six here.

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