Saturday, August 13, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

This excerpt comes from Return Engagement which is available at http://www.whiskeycreekpress.com/store/index.php?main_page=product_info&products_id=819

In this excerpt my heroine just got a message from my hero asking her to meet him in an unfamiliar place.

She took three steps into the quiet darkness before she finally realized something was wrong. Things didn’t feel right in this room. Every nerve in her body screamed danger, and she seemed to have ice water instead of blood in her veins. She was getting out of here!  With a gasp, she turned to run, but she had waited too late.  A small man stood between her and the front door.
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9 comments:

  1. Sherry GloagAugust 14, 2011 at 5:05 AM

    Awesome :-) So much tension, and of course we want to know who the man is! Great 6

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  2. AnonymousAugust 14, 2011 at 10:41 AM

    That was intense. The last line made me want more!

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  3. AnonymousAugust 14, 2011 at 11:00 AM

    Intense six! Loved it! Thanks for sharing.

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  4. UnknownAugust 14, 2011 at 12:19 PM

    You know how to snag a reader. Great six, Elaine.

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  5. Cate MastersAugust 14, 2011 at 12:27 PM

    Wow, very suspenseful. Great teaser.

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  6. Carrie Ann RyanAugust 14, 2011 at 3:47 PM

    Such tension!

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  7. Sandra NachlingerAugust 14, 2011 at 6:12 PM

    Yikes! Lots of tension. Good writing.

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  8. Karysa FaireAugust 14, 2011 at 6:20 PM

    I love it when someone knows she's in danger and reacts to it--even if it is too late.

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  9. Elaine CantrellAugust 15, 2011 at 8:47 AM

    Thanks, everyone for stopping by. I appreciate it.

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