Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday. I'd love for you to leave me a comment. In today's excerpt Kara my heroine has just gotten home from her sister's wedding. Too bad that her sister stole her fiance! Do stop by next week. This is a pivotal event in the book, and I need more than six sentences to tell it. Okay, here we go.
Her wedding dress gleamed and sparkled through its heavy
plastic covering. On impulse she unzipped the cover and caressed the heavy
satin. She had so loved this dress!
She fingered the small pearls sewn into the bodice, and
stuck her arm into one long, sheer, embroidered sleeve. How sad for such a
beautiful dress to sit in a closet forever.
Without
warning, anger flooded Kara.
Poor Kara! I will be back next week to read the next six! Good post, Elaine. :-)
ReplyDeleteThank you, Theresa. this is going to take Kara to places she doesn't really want to go.
ReplyDeleteI feel really bad for Kara! I'll be back next week as well. Great six, Elaine!
ReplyDeletePoor Kara, can't wait to see what happens next. Great description of the dress!
ReplyDeleteThe complexity you are introducing here is tantalising. Well done.
ReplyDeleteMore pain ahead for Kara until. . .
ReplyDeleteGood six, Elaine.
Loved the way you described the dress and the emotion. I feel for her!
ReplyDeleteOh my that dress sounds beautiful. Will she destroy it? I hope not.
ReplyDeleteI feel really bad for Kara. You did a really good job of showing her pain over the situation.
ReplyDeleteGreat emotion. The dress does sound too beautiful to sit in a closet. Enjoyed your six...back next week.
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