Sunday, September 9, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday: He's Dangerous

Welcome to another edition of Six Sentence Sunday. My excerpt today is from Return Engagement. In this excerpt, my hero and heroine are meeting for the first time since she got PTSD. She finds that time hasn't diminished the attraction they feel for each other.

Blurb:

Elizabeth Lane has it all, but an actress isn’t the kind of woman Senator Henry Lovinggood wants for his son, Richard.  Ten years ago he broke Richard and Elizabeth up, but this time Elizabeth’s fighting back, a decision that leads to kidnapping and attempted murder and alienates her from the man of her dreams.

Sentences:


Her breath left her as she admitted the truth. He was dangerous. He always had been, and nothing had changed. No wonder she got an adrenalin rush every single time they were alone together. A sudden shaft of desire kicked her in her middle when she remembered how his bare, male skin felt against her own. Her arms tightened around his shoulders.

Return Engagement is available at Amazon, Barnes and Noble, and http://www.whiskeycreekpress.com/store/index.php?main_page=advanced_search_result&search_in_description=1&zenid=35a679d1f79df6958f6331a37a50be83&keyword=return+engagement

6 comments:

  1. I feel her longing and desire, Elaine. Beautiful.

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  2. Great depiction of her interior conflict. Nice six.

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  3. Is the danger part of the attraction, I wonder?

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  4. Really sensual six, you put across her desire brilliantly.

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  5. Thank you, Charmaine. Richard is her true love. Jenna, he has thrown her world in chaos so she really is conflicted. Christine, thank you. It's hard writing blurbs. Kate, yes, the danger is a part of it. Karen, thank you so much.

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