Sunday, May 29, 2016

Snippet Sunday and Weekend Writing Warriors


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We know that Susan won her bet when Kurt asked her to go with him to a party. Today they have just arrived at the party where Kurt is joking around with their host and leads him to believe that he and Susan are involved.

Excerpt:


Mendoza grinned at her. “Hmm, maybe I was wrong. Your woman likes your touch, Kurt.”

Susan’s face burned as Kurt shot a glance at her. “I try to please her in every way.”

Mendoza slapped Kurt on the back. “Good job, my friend. Both of you, dance, eat, drink. Enjoy yourselves.” With a shout of laughter, Mendoza rejoined the party while Susan took Kurt to task. 
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10 comments:

  1. The Belle in BlueMay 29, 2016 at 11:06 AM

    Oh, I don't think she's going to be happy about that exchange! I think he's about to get an earful! Great snippet.

    ~Joyce Scarbrough

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  2. Charmaine GordonMay 29, 2016 at 11:37 AM

    Trouble maker! Just when they were having fun. . .

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  3. Siobhan MuirMay 29, 2016 at 1:45 PM

    Uh oh. That might not go over well. Great snippet, Elaine.

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  4. Elizabeth AlsobrooksMay 29, 2016 at 3:21 PM

    Hm, I hear trouble coming...

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  5. AnonymousMay 29, 2016 at 5:47 PM

    Hmm. I wonder what she'll have to say about his double entendres. Too bad; things were going so well between them.

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  6. UnknownMay 30, 2016 at 12:57 AM

    Uh, well, okay... Someone's implying stuff he really shouldn't be.

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  7. LindaMay 30, 2016 at 5:21 PM

    "I try to please her in every way" What? They're just out for the first time, aren't they? It's just so misplaced!

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  8. Iris BJune 1, 2016 at 5:22 AM

    Oh no! I can smell trouble ??

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  9. Daelyn MorganaJune 1, 2016 at 5:09 PM

    LOL! Oh I think that retort of Kurt's is going to come back and bite him in the ass with Susan. I'm going to love to see how this plays out between them. The fact that her cheeks burn red means I think she might like the idea of them involved. Great snippet.

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  10. CeciliaJune 1, 2016 at 11:11 PM

    Naughty naughty snippet, lol.

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