Welcome to Saturday Sample and Weekend Writing Warriors. Today we'll continue to share excerpts from Never Trust a Pretty Wolf. On Sunday when you finish here, do go to http://www.wewriwa.blogspot.com for more excerpts from a bunch of great authors.
Liesel pushed her way into the little cave. “We don’t have a flashlight. Do you think we can find the coordinates in the dark?”
“No, I guess we’ll have to come back with a...” he paused then said, “wait! I see something written on the wall.”
Liesel breathed a sigh of relief. The sooner they got out of this cave the better. In the faint light coming through the crack, she saw the coordinates written on the far wall. “Yeah, there they are. Melton’s pretty tricky, isn’t he?” She memorized the coordinates and shoved Andy toward the exit.
This week: I've picked up where we left off last week.
What a cliffhanger!
ReplyDeleteShe is SO bossy! lol
Good scene. :-)
I missed last week, but I see they got the next clue. She must have an exceptional memory to commit map co-ordinates reliably like that. But I wonder what she's stepped on? I had a feeling this cave would hold more than a treasure hunt clue!
ReplyDeleteEnjoyed the snippet, can;'t wait to see what she stepped on. Could be bad, could be good...great cliffhanger for us!
ReplyDeleteUh-oh! What did she step on? I have a feeling it's not a snake.
ReplyDeleteWonderful cliffhanger! I have such a macabre mind I'm thinking she's stepped on a decomposing body (although it probably won't be anything nearly as scary). Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteWhat is it! You left us hanging. lol
ReplyDeleteSince she already has snakes on the mind, I know in her place that's what I'd be thinking of. Hopefully it's nothing major!
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