Sunday, October 30, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

This scene is from my upcoming release The Sentence.  The scene is between my hero and heroine.
“Look above your head,” he said.

Rachel looked up and saw a sprig of mistletoe tied to a ceiling fan with a long piece of red yarn. 

“That’s mistletoe, Rachel.”

“So?  I imagine the high school kids tied it there so they could steal kisses.”

When Clint took another step toward her, Rachel’s heart started to pound. 

9 comments:

  1. Wonderful six sentences! I wish you a ton of sales with your books! Happy Sunday and Happy Halloween!

    Stephanie Adkins
    http://stephanieadkins.blogspot.com/

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  2. Thank you, Stephanie. I hope you have a great day as well.

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  3. Great six...this sounds like a fun read.

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  4. Thanks, Christine. It did have some funny moments.

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  5. Nice 6. Love when she realizes just why he's pointing out the mistletoe.

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  6. A great fun-filled six this week. thanks for sharing.

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  7. Me thinks HS kids aren't the only ones stealing a kiss. Great six, Elaine.

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  8. Someone's gonna get kissed!!! lol Great six!

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  9. cheeky six, I love how he points it out to her.

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