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We know so far that Rocky ticked off drug dealers and had to fake his death so he can enter the witness protection program. Last week Rocky called Aimee even though he wasn't supposed to and told her he'd bought a house for them. I'm skipping forward a few paragraphs to the time when Aimee is almost at Rocky's new house. She has car trouble, and next week she'll be meeting the answer to her problem. Some creative punctuation. 

Excerpt:
Aimee groaned and laid her head down on her car’s steering wheel. Her GPS told her she was only five miles from Rocky’s new property, but her car wouldn’t go. It had slowed down and rolled to a gentle stop on the side of the road thirty minutes ago. Nothing she could think to do had revived it. In desperation she had even tried to find her owner’s manual, a useless task if ever there was one.

Where were the police or the highway patrol when you needed them; not one single car had passed her on the small country road. Oh, My, Goodness! Was it dangerous in this isolated place? If she got kidnapped, nobody would ever know what happened to her. She’d end up on a milk carton or bulletin board somewhere with the caption ‘Have you seen this girl?’ under her picture. 

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