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My snippet takes place right where I ended up last week. My hero has told my heroine that he had an affair and now has a child with the woman, a child he intends to bring into their home. I used some creative punctuation and added a dialogue tag in the last sentence to use more text. In the real version I don't have those semicolons. This is unedited so if you see something give a yell.
Nodding, she
stumbled on her way to the door. “Wait,” he begged; he wasn’t a man who begged,
but he’d do it now and be happy for the chance. “I’m sorry; so sorry. I’ve
never done a thing like that before or since, and if there was any way to undo
it I would. I love you more than my own life, and I betrayed you. That hurts me
almost as much as it’s hurt you. You’re my whole world, and I’ve torn your
heart out.” He drew a deep breath and said, “But even for you I can’t give him up.”
