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Saturday, March 3, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday

Welcome to my blog.  Today's sentences are from The Welcome Inn which is romantic suspense.  First a blurb, then the excerpt. 

Blurb:

Julianna can’t stand Buck Abercrombie!  He’s rude, chauvinistic, and exasperating, and he’s her new boss.  Why couldn’t the bank see that she’s done a good job cleaning up The Welcome Inn?  Why wouldn’t they loan her the money to buy the Inn?  Now Buck comes along and reaps the benefits of all her hard work.  Oh, and don’t forget his nasty, criminal brother Travis.  He works for Buck, and her friend Melanie has a crush on him!

Sentences:

She wasn’t alone in the bedroom. She saw a shadowy figure silhouetted against the drapes, and Julianna supposed he must have made a noise that wakened her.
She broke into a cold sweat. Should she scream or pretend to be asleep? She quickly made her decision as the dark figure approached the bed. "Buck, help me," she screamed.

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5 comments:

Sarah said...

Oh, yikes! This is scary! Engaging six, Elaine. ;c)

Sarah Ballance

Gayle said...

Heck, I'd opt for screaming, too!

Karen de Lange said...

Definitely screaming time! Great, nerve-wracking six!

Ginger Simpson said...

That was pretty intense. Great job!

Christine Warner said...

Intense six....hope you follow it up next week!