If not for her horrible
sister, she would have worn this dress only hours before when she married
Brandon, the love of her life. How could Kelly have done it? How could she have
betrayed her own flesh and blood?
With a cry of pure rage,
Kara grabbed the sleeve of her beautiful dress and jerked as hard as she could.
The gossamer fabric parted with a tearing sound that sent Kara’s temper sky
high. She tore at the dress, ripping off buttons and pearls and shredding those
wonderful, sheer sleeves.
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Oh, this is a fantastic six! I don't know what the sister did, but it sounds just terrible and you did a great job with the visual descriptions of how emotionally it all affected her. Great job!
ReplyDeleteI think Kara needs a hug. Or maybe some chocolate. Or maybe both. I still can't believe she actually went to the wedding. I mean I can believe it, but I don't think I would have been strong enough. Makes Kara someone to look up to for me, I guess.
ReplyDeleteWell done, Elaine!
How horrible to have been betrayed and then have to deal with the unforgiving details. Poor Kara.
ReplyDeleteI'd be ripping it to shreds too and wishing it were my sister's hair or dress or something... Great description of her emotional state here...
ReplyDeleteY'all come back next week. It isn't over yet. Thanks for coming.
ReplyDeleteY'all come back next week. It isn't over yet. Thanks for coming.
ReplyDeleteOh, forget the man. Save the dress! It sounded beautiful. But of course, it represented all her hurt and betrayal... Poor dear.
ReplyDeletePerfect emotional breakdown--focused on all that had been planned and perfect (symbolically the dress) and rip it apart...just like her sister had ripped apart her perfect plans. Great six, Elaine :-)
ReplyDeleteWow. I can really feel her anger here. Excellent job!
ReplyDeleteDianne, Theresa, and Sarah, thank you for commenting. Come back next week. This isn't over yet.
ReplyDeleteGreat scene with lots of drama. I'm loving this story!
ReplyDeleteAnd thank you for leaving a comment on my Sweet Saturday Sample post yesterday.