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Jenna West has no idea what she might have done to her new tenant Mike Hightower. He's surly and hateful every single time they meet, and he looks at her as though he despises her.
He does despise her. She's from the Middle East, and people like her killed his friend Ramirez when the army sent them to Iraq.
Will the power of love work its magic to soften Mike's bitter hatred, or will he ignore his growing attraction for his pretty landlady?
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He does despise her. She's from the Middle East, and people like her killed his friend Ramirez when the army sent them to Iraq.
Will the power of love work its magic to soften Mike's bitter hatred, or will he ignore his growing attraction for his pretty landlady?
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I like the way you keep the story moving forward and show how the two of them have interacted.
ReplyDeleteHigh price! It will be interesting to find out if he takes the duplex. Of course, there wouldn't be a story if he moves to another place.
ReplyDeleteOh, she has a child? Interesting wrinkle.
ReplyDeleteTerse conversation, I notice neither of them is making any attempt at anything friendlier. I though the fact she has a child was an intersting plot twist too!
ReplyDeleteSounds a little tense...
ReplyDeleteDefinitely all business right now. :-)
ReplyDeleteHe's kind of being polite. I'll take it.
ReplyDeleteHe's at least still willing to rent from her. That's a step forward. :)
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