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Saturday, April 23, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday


Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday. My excerpt today is from A New Dream and takes place when Matt and Violet declare their love for each other. A New Dream is available at http://www.astraeapress.com/#ecwid:category=662249&mode=product&product=2676585

"I did mean it, Matt!"

The words barely left her mouth before Matt crushed her against his chest. "I love you too, Violet, oh, so much! I was scared you wouldn't think I"m good enough for you. Are you sure?" he pleaded.

Violet thought some of the tears on her cheeks belonged to Matt, but no, a pro-football player wouldn't cry just because a woman said she loved him.

9 comments:

Rebecca Royce said...

He might! For the right woman!! Well done!

Sandra Sookoo said...

aww, nice job!

Sarah said...

Nicely done! Moving six.

Cate Masters said...

Such a tender scene. Wonderful snippet.

Jessica K said...

Aawww. Well done.

Lindsay said...

Love it. Love the emotions. And real men do cry, and eat quiches

Susanna Fraser said...

Aww, so romantic and sweet.

AllureVanSanz said...

Very sweet. Thanks for sharing.

All my best,
Allure Van Sanz

Jayel Kaye said...

a macho ftball player who cries.. what could be better