Welcome to Six Sentence Sunday. My excerpt today is from A New Dream and takes place when Matt and Violet declare their love for each other. A New Dream is available at http://www.astraeapress.com/#ecwid:category=662249&mode=product&product=2676585
"I did mean it, Matt!"
The words barely left her mouth before Matt crushed her against his chest. "I love you too, Violet, oh, so much! I was scared you wouldn't think I"m good enough for you. Are you sure?" he pleaded.
Violet thought some of the tears on her cheeks belonged to Matt, but no, a pro-football player wouldn't cry just because a woman said she loved him.
He might! For the right woman!! Well done!
ReplyDeleteaww, nice job!
ReplyDeleteNicely done! Moving six.
ReplyDeleteSuch a tender scene. Wonderful snippet.
ReplyDeleteAawww. Well done.
ReplyDeleteLove it. Love the emotions. And real men do cry, and eat quiches
ReplyDeleteAww, so romantic and sweet.
ReplyDeleteVery sweet. Thanks for sharing.
ReplyDeleteAll my best,
Allure Van Sanz
a macho ftball player who cries.. what could be better
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