You’re thinking he’ll be another Matt. Chris doesn’t quite measure up does he, so I’m sure you’re overjoyed.” Her face suffused with color. “Anyway,” she spat, “you were always hot for Stacey yourself. You couldn’t sit still from the minute she came into the house until the time she left. You panted after her like a dog after a bone.”
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Lots of tension in this scene. Mom needs a glass of wine!
ReplyDeleteHope she gets through it soon :-)
ReplyDeleteWow you're packing a punch with this snippet. Awesome writing.
ReplyDeleteWow, nice tension and character development in 6 sentences!
ReplyDeleteMom seems full of rage. Great job at bringing that through.
ReplyDeleteGreat six, Elaine.
ReplyDeleteLots of emotion and tension... very well delivered. Thanks for sharing!
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