He sucked in
another breath and turned to his mother’s coffin. Did she really deserve his regard?
She didn’t look
like he thought she would. Death had
treated his father kindly, but it hadn’t seemed to touch his mother at
all. She looked breathtakingly beautiful
with dark hair, a flawless complexion, and rosy pink lips. He had seen many pictures of her and watched
every movie she ever made, yet he still hadn’t expected her to look so beautiful. No wonder his father had loved her. No wonder her fans had idolized her.
She had a serene
expression on her face, not the expression of a woman driven to murder and
suicide. He looked carefully to see if he could spot the place under her jaw where
the bullet had gone in, but the morticians had done a good job; the only thing
he saw was a faint discoloration.
The diamond and
wedding band his father had given her still graced her finger. Everyone always said how much they loved each
other, and in the few dim memories he had of them they were always laughing and
seemed happy.
When he thought of
them, he usually got a warm, safe feeling.
He could distinctly remember both of them sitting on the bed with him
reading him a story before he went to sleep.
A faint smile
curved his lips when he thought of the time he and his mother had sneaked up on
his father while he was asleep on the beach.
They had poured ocean water from a little sand bucket onto his
stomach. He had come awake with a roar
and jumped up and chased them down the beach.
When he caught them, he had threatened to throw both of them into the
ocean. Instead, they had walked down the
beach hand-in-hand and found a hot dog stand where his father bought everyone a
hot dog.
Other memories
clamored for attention, like the time his mother fell and broke her ankle. He could still picture the fear on his father’s
face. His mother had bitten her lip and hidden her face against his father’s
shoulder. His dad had hugged her and
looked as if he was trying to take away her pain.
When they came
home from the hospital, his father had carried her upstairs and stayed with her
the entire evening. Had some of his
father’s aides fussed at him for missing appointments? He thought he remembered his father bellowing
at them and telling them to leave him alone.
What in the name of God happened on that
mountain where they died?
Oh, what a sad and yet poignant snippet. Thanks for sharing. Good luck!
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Thanks, Laurel. I should know something in the next few weeks.
ReplyDeleteOh, I love that! I hope it gets picked up because I'd love to read the rest. Very unusual concept. :)
ReplyDeleteWhat indeed happened on that mountain? Intriguing premise. So poignant to have his parents' deaths intermingled with his good memories of them. Here's hoping this gets picked up! :)
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ReplyDeleteThis is a great scene. So many emotions
Very touching excerpt. Good luck on your submission!
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