“I’m not marrying Drew!” Peyton ripped off her veil and
kicked off her expensive designer heels. “Unbutton me; hurry!”
She felt Ashley’s fingers fumbling at the buttons on the back
of the dress. “Rip ‘em off if you have to, Ash.”
“I’ve got the last one.”
Peyton shimmied out of her dress and stomped it for spite,
taking satisfaction when a nearby chair pricked the heavy fabric.
“I’m getting out of here, but don’t tell anyone.”
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Good for her!
ReplyDeleteI'm really liking Payton, Elaine. She's a great character---I like that stomp. :D
I'm with Payton all the way. Run fast.
ReplyDeleteWoohoo! The runaway bride! Go Payton! :-)
ReplyDeleteOh my runaway bride. I love it. Can't wait to find out more.
ReplyDeleteYAY! I'm so glad she stood up after all. Great snippet, Elaine.
ReplyDeleteI had a feeling you wouldn't write a wimp heroine and here we are, cheering for this brave gutsy young woman. Good for her and for you, Elaine.
ReplyDeleteGood for her! Wonder if she's got a plan though, with manipulative mom around she needs to get away and stay away!
ReplyDeleteI'm glad she finally doing what she wants instead of what her mother wants!
ReplyDeleteI love the defiance, but, um... Don't you think they'll notice when she's not there? This could be fun!
ReplyDeleteVery intriguing. I love it!
ReplyDeleteThank goodness she´s running away! I can't believe her mom wanted to force her to marry. Great snippet, Elaine!
ReplyDeleteI want to know why she's running away.
ReplyDeleteVery nice. You captured the sense of frenzied action & made the whole scene easy to visualize.
ReplyDeleteThanks to all for commenting. Allyson, he cheated on her.
ReplyDeleteWell, she's made up her mind.
ReplyDeleteWhy the hell would her mother want her to marry a guy who cheated on her? I mean that's realistic but I really don't get people most of the time. I hope she can elope.
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