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Saturday, May 21, 2011

Six Sentence Sunday

This excerpt is from A New Dream which is available at http://www.astraeapress.com



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Matt hauled the steering wheel to correct the slide, but it was
useless. The car turned around once more and skidded backwards
for a short distance before it charged off the road. It jumped a steep
ditch and went airborne. All Matt could see was a blur of trees and
darkness as the car careened into the woods. It made a lazy turn in
the air and came to rest bottom side up.

The last thing he remembered was the sound of Stacey's screams.


17 comments:

Ginger Simpson said...

Great Video and strong six. I assume Stacey is the loose end. :)

Patricia Preston said...

Great description and very tense!

Elaine Cantrell said...

Ginger, how ever did you guess?
Patricia, thanks so much. I wish I could have had more than six sentences. The scene started with a romantic moonlight drive and ended with tragedy.

Carolyn Rosewood said...

Suspensful!

Susanna Fraser said...

Powerful six!

bglashbrooks said...

Very action-oriented six; makes me want to know what happens next! Great six!

Viviane Brentanos said...

Nice drama unfolding, here.

Chrystalla Thoma said...

Yikes poor people! I wonder if she survives... Great six!

Kary said...

Nail-bitting. Great six. I hope everyone survives intact.

kayspringsteen said...

I could definitely feel this accident. Nice description.

Jessica K said...

You don't need any more sentences. This is very powerful.

Felicia said...

Nicely done. Very suspenseful.

Sandy Ruth said...

Yikes! Talk about a cliff hanger! Great action.
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Lisa said...

Great six! I'm hooked already :)

Lindsay said...

Love the six.

Meg said...

Wow. Great six!

Alanna Coca said...

Very powerful six here.