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Matt hauled the steering wheel to correct the slide, but it was
useless. The car turned around once more and skidded backwards
for a short distance before it charged off the road. It jumped a steep
ditch and went airborne. All Matt could see was a blur of trees and
darkness as the car careened into the woods. It made a lazy turn in
the air and came to rest bottom side up.
The last thing he remembered was the sound of Stacey's screams.
Great Video and strong six. I assume Stacey is the loose end. :)
ReplyDeleteGreat description and very tense!
ReplyDeleteGinger, how ever did you guess?
ReplyDeletePatricia, thanks so much. I wish I could have had more than six sentences. The scene started with a romantic moonlight drive and ended with tragedy.
Suspensful!
ReplyDeletePowerful six!
ReplyDeleteVery action-oriented six; makes me want to know what happens next! Great six!
ReplyDeleteNice drama unfolding, here.
ReplyDeleteYikes poor people! I wonder if she survives... Great six!
ReplyDeleteNail-bitting. Great six. I hope everyone survives intact.
ReplyDeleteI could definitely feel this accident. Nice description.
ReplyDeleteYou don't need any more sentences. This is very powerful.
ReplyDeleteNicely done. Very suspenseful.
ReplyDeleteYikes! Talk about a cliff hanger! Great action.
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Great six! I'm hooked already :)
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ReplyDeleteWow. Great six!
ReplyDeleteVery powerful six here.
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