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Sunday, May 29, 2016

Snippet Sunday and Weekend Writing Warriors


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We know that Susan won her bet when Kurt asked her to go with him to a party. Today they have just arrived at the party where Kurt is joking around with their host and leads him to believe that he and Susan are involved.

Excerpt:


Mendoza grinned at her. “Hmm, maybe I was wrong. Your woman likes your touch, Kurt.”

Susan’s face burned as Kurt shot a glance at her. “I try to please her in every way.”

Mendoza slapped Kurt on the back. “Good job, my friend. Both of you, dance, eat, drink. Enjoy yourselves.” With a shout of laughter, Mendoza rejoined the party while Susan took Kurt to task. 

10 comments:

The Belle in Blue said...

Oh, I don't think she's going to be happy about that exchange! I think he's about to get an earful! Great snippet.

~Joyce Scarbrough

Charmaine Gordon said...

Trouble maker! Just when they were having fun. . .

Siobhan Muir said...

Uh oh. That might not go over well. Great snippet, Elaine.

Elizabeth Alsobrooks said...

Hm, I hear trouble coming...

Ed Hoornaert said...

Hmm. I wonder what she'll have to say about his double entendres. Too bad; things were going so well between them.

Caitlin Stern said...

Uh, well, okay... Someone's implying stuff he really shouldn't be.

Linda said...

"I try to please her in every way" What? They're just out for the first time, aren't they? It's just so misplaced!

Iris B said...

Oh no! I can smell trouble ??

Daelyn Morgana said...

LOL! Oh I think that retort of Kurt's is going to come back and bite him in the ass with Susan. I'm going to love to see how this plays out between them. The fact that her cheeks burn red means I think she might like the idea of them involved. Great snippet.

Cecilia Corona said...

Naughty naughty snippet, lol.