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We know that Susan won her bet when Kurt asked her to go with him to a party. Today they have just arrived at the party where Kurt is joking around with their host and leads him to believe that he and Susan are involved.
Excerpt:
Mendoza grinned at her. “Hmm, maybe I was
wrong. Your woman likes your touch, Kurt.”
Susan’s face burned as Kurt shot a glance at her. “I try to please her in every way.”
Mendoza slapped Kurt on the back. “Good job, my friend. Both of you, dance, eat, drink. Enjoy yourselves.” With a shout of laughter, Mendoza rejoined the party while Susan took Kurt to task.
Susan’s face burned as Kurt shot a glance at her. “I try to please her in every way.”
Mendoza slapped Kurt on the back. “Good job, my friend. Both of you, dance, eat, drink. Enjoy yourselves.” With a shout of laughter, Mendoza rejoined the party while Susan took Kurt to task.
Oh, I don't think she's going to be happy about that exchange! I think he's about to get an earful! Great snippet.
ReplyDelete~Joyce Scarbrough
Trouble maker! Just when they were having fun. . .
ReplyDeleteUh oh. That might not go over well. Great snippet, Elaine.
ReplyDeleteHm, I hear trouble coming...
ReplyDeleteHmm. I wonder what she'll have to say about his double entendres. Too bad; things were going so well between them.
ReplyDeleteUh, well, okay... Someone's implying stuff he really shouldn't be.
ReplyDelete"I try to please her in every way" What? They're just out for the first time, aren't they? It's just so misplaced!
ReplyDeleteOh no! I can smell trouble ??
ReplyDeleteLOL! Oh I think that retort of Kurt's is going to come back and bite him in the ass with Susan. I'm going to love to see how this plays out between them. The fact that her cheeks burn red means I think she might like the idea of them involved. Great snippet.
ReplyDeleteNaughty naughty snippet, lol.
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