Under
the influence of those piercing chocolate eyes Madison told the truth. “The
real world is cold and cruel, and fairy tales never come true. They give us
high expectations that are certain to fail, and when they do we’re left with
the ashes of our dreams and a bitter taste in our mouths.”
Joshua shook his head as a masculine
finger stroked the side of her face, leaving a trail of molten fire everywhere
he touched her. “You’re awfully young to be so cynical. What happened to you,
Madison?”
Great emotions! Well done.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written six!
ReplyDeleteYou did an amazing job with the emotion...would love to hear her answer!
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ReplyDeleteExcellent hook. Makes me want to know the answer!Great Six!
ReplyDeleteBeautifully written, Elaine. Both her line and his were perfect.
ReplyDeletethank you so much, Rae and Kate.
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