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Susan waited to
leave her room until she had composed herself.
She really wished Benjy hadn’t interrupted her and Kurt. She had enjoyed that kiss! The feel of his lips on hers and the strength
of his arms around her had sent a bolt of desire shooting through Susan that
had left her shaken. She remembered some
of what had happened when they spent the night with Mendoza , but her misery over the estrangement
with Kurt had caused her to forget the strong physical
attraction between them.
Now, his kiss and
the banked passion she sensed inside him made Susan wonder just what it would
be like to greet him at the door of their home wearing something soft and
silky, something that would slide right off with a silken whisper and leave
nothing between his hands and her skin except the faintest trace of
perfume.
Oh, very intriguing six. Leaves me wanting to know the whole story between them. Great six!!
ReplyDeleteThank you, K.E. This manuscript is next on my revision list.
ReplyDeleteOnce that naughty little imagination kicks in, there's bound to be more happening.
ReplyDeleteElaine, I had computer issues last week. I did make it around to read, just wasn’t able to comment. Things are all better now so I can leave my “mark”. Both snippets--today's and last week's--are really intriguing. Lots of conflict and "wanting" going on. Keep up the terrific work.
ReplyDeleteNice six, I'm can well imagine that scene by the front door!
ReplyDeleteVery nice, Elaine! Sensual snippet. well done! :-)
ReplyDeleteOh, very sexy! Love it.
ReplyDeleteThank you all so much!
ReplyDeleteOoh! Very nice!
ReplyDeleteVery intensely sensual six!
ReplyDeleteIf she's thinking these thoughts at school, she's in a bad way! I think she's going to try to make that little daydream come true! Sexy six!
ReplyDeleteOh, yes, she definitely is thinking that way.
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