On our first full day as man and wife she cried over another man and sent her husband packing. She should have been worried about how I might be feeling. Instead, she focused on dear, sweet Alex.
He swallowed hard. He knew one thing: dear, sweet Alex had better stay the hell out of his way. You let that ambulance chaser so much as call Elizabeth…
Intense, isn't he?
Elaine,
ReplyDeleteLove the jealousy. Great six, but then you know I'm a fan.
Nice emotion.
ReplyDeleteWoW! I wouldn't want to be Alex.
ReplyDeleteWonderful show of tense emotion. Hope he's not setting himself up for heartbreak!
ReplyDeleteHA! love the set-up here... lots of good conflict! Is that the book cover? SWEEEET!
ReplyDeletegreat internal tension going on here.
ReplyDeleteThanks for stopping by, ladies. Meg, I couldn't find your sentences. Didn't you play this week?
ReplyDeleteGreat six. Can't tell if he's setting himself for a jealous act or heartbreak
ReplyDeleteI feel for him!
ReplyDeleteLots of emotion here! I feel for both Alex and Richard--and her.
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