Marnie stumbled on
the rough dirt road and made a rude, unladylike noise to express her
displeasure. The sun had broiled her for
the last hour, and she could feel her skin turning lobster red. Fair skin like hers always burned.
She blew a breath
of air through her mouth toward her forehead.
It briefly lifted her blonde bangs which had totally plastered
themselves to her head. Sweat poured from
ever pore on her body. Each step she took
stirred up little dust devils that threatened to choke her.
She rounded a
sharp curve and saw a white house at the end of the road. Thank goodness! She had begun to think she’d never find her
way out of this grassy wilderness. She
heard a door slam and saw a man come out of a barn that could use a coat of
paint. What little remained on the
structure hung in peeling strips that gave the entire property a disreputable
look although otherwise the place projected an air of good repair.
The man hadn’t
seen her yet. She watched as he stripped
off his tee shirt and wiped his face and upper back. Muscles rippled in his chest and arms, and as
he swept off his hat the sun gleamed on his dark hair, turning it as shiny as a
blackbird’s wing.
When he looked
around and saw her, she raised her hand in greeting. “Hello,” she called.
He put his hat on
and came to meet her. At five nine she
towered over lots of women, but this guy made her seem petite. He had to be six four at least. Up close, the definition of the muscles in
his chest and shoulders made her feel slightly flustered. Her nostrils flared; he smelled of sweat,
hay, and motor oil, not an unpleasing combination. She liked his eyes too. They reminded her of the sky right before
darkness fell, full of depth and mystery, hinting of the unknown and making a
girl long to plumb those depths. “Can I
help you?” he asked.
Nice opening! I like that she's a taller than average woman, which I haven't really found a lot of in most books.
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