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My excerpt today is from Return Engagement. In this excerpt, my hero and heroine have met at the beach after a ten year separation orchestrated by Richard's father who didn't think Elizabeth was good enough for his son. Elizabeth speaks first.
"I could always tell
what you were feeling by your eyes.”
“What do you see in my eyes right now?”
Elizabeth didn’t stop to think. If she had she wouldn’t have done it. She reached across the table and gently touched his cheek. She’d guess from the scratchy stubble on his face that he hadn’t shaved since early morning. Her heart almost stopped when she heard Richard catch his breath. He picked up her hand and held it to his face for a moment before bringing it to his lips.
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“What do you see in my eyes right now?”
Elizabeth didn’t stop to think. If she had she wouldn’t have done it. She reached across the table and gently touched his cheek. She’d guess from the scratchy stubble on his face that he hadn’t shaved since early morning. Her heart almost stopped when she heard Richard catch his breath. He picked up her hand and held it to his face for a moment before bringing it to his lips.
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What a sweet, romantic moment you've captured in this snippet, Elaine! A feel-good moment. :-)
ReplyDeleteSweet and sensuous. (Seriously -- I love the way you incorporated the senses in this scene.)
ReplyDeleteThey are really like falling in love all over again. It's a little scary for the life they built separately so far.
ReplyDeleteWow, that is powerful. Sad that they lost so man years but what they felt is still there. Well done.
ReplyDeleteLove the way you describe the stubble on his face. The way he brings her hand to his face is so sexy and sweet. Love it!
ReplyDeleteThis is so lovely, Elaine!
ReplyDeleteI'm just wondering when his father or her fiance is going to appear . . .
Awww. So gentle and sweet. Love the scene painted here. Great job.
ReplyDeleteThis is such a sweet moment!
ReplyDeleteSweet, romantic eight! Love it!
ReplyDeleteYou have a lovely rhythm to your writing. So gentle and something's gotta give next.
ReplyDeleteAww, this is a lovely moment. Makes me sad for all the years they lost, but curious to see what's going to happen next. Great 8!
ReplyDeleteAww, what a sweet moment, Elaine. Great snippet. :)
ReplyDeleteSuch a tender moment! I wonder what he's feeling. :)
ReplyDeleteMake my heart melt. Stuff like that makes me swoon. :)
ReplyDeleteEven this short snippet made me dislike the absent father, a good bit of writing with some great emotion!
ReplyDeleteNicely done. The stubble is the detail that sells the whole scene for me.
ReplyDeleteThe agony of being in love. It's all there in this snippet. Wonderful.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful scene ...
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