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Saturday, April 25, 2020

Saturday Sample and Weekend Writing Warriors: Never Trust a Pretty Wolf

Welcome to Saturday Sample and Weekend Writing Warriors. Today we'll continue to share excerpts from Never Trust a Pretty Wolf. On Sunday when you finish here, do go to http://www.wewriwa.blogspot.com for more excerpts from a bunch of great authors.

Blurb:
Liesel Wolf has a secret, a dangerous secret she’ll go to any lengths to conceal. When she’s paired in a charity game with sexy marshal Andy Bryce, a man with secrets of his own, her carefully constructed world comes crashing down, and Liesel’s on a collision course with her past.



Excerpt: 
Chapter One

Last Week



This week: We're in Andy's POV

11 comments:

Charmaine Gordon said...

Oh my gosh, trouble ahead as always. Well done, my friend.

Jessica E. Subject said...

Yes, he's in this whether he likes it or not.

Diane Burton said...

Too late to leave now. I like how you showed his cynicism, typical in law enforcement officers. So, what's he going to do now? Can't wait to find out.

Veronica Scott said...

He's definitely in for it now,whatever may be going on. I'm curious about what else is happening in his life...so many threads to pull - great snippet!

Karen Michelle Nutt said...

Can't wait to find out what he's going to do.

Brittany said...

This can't be good! Too late to turn back now! Can't wait to see what happens next.

Nancy Gideon said...

Yup. In for a penny or a pound, as they say (I don't know, do they still say that?). These excerpts are such a tease . . . in a good way.

Ed Hoornaert said...

His uncertainty is a great way to ratchet up the tension.

Linda said...

The thing is with the phone off, you can't call for help either.

Jenna said...

And he waited too late because he really wants to go with her. This is proving quite the adventure for both of them!

Teresa Cypher said...

Nice scene! I'm surprised that she said more than two words to him. Maybe I'm remembering wrong, but the money is for charity?? If that's the case, the competitiveness is way over the top. If the contestants are personally winning the money, I could see why she's reacting this way. SO...I'm really wondering why she cares so deeply about winning the money unless her stakes are in some way personal...

Love the buildup of tension. And the fact that you have my wheels turning so hard trying to figure it all out says that you're doing a great job with this story!