He reached for Marley’s hand as they got off the elevator. “Did you have a good time tonight?”
Marley ducked her head and blushed when she saw the hot light dancing in his eyes. "You know I did."
He gently raised her chin and stared into her eyes. “You have beautiful eyes,” he whispered.
Marley’s heart took off in a mad gallop. Every single nerve ending in her body sang with his nearness. He slowly bent his head and grazed her lips with his own. “Kissing you takes my breath away,” he muttered.
Great job conveying chemistry, Elaine, and good luck on your release!
ReplyDeleteI love the 'gentleness of this Sample Elaine. Best wishes with your newest release.
ReplyDeleteI love how you described her heart which "took off in a mad gallop".
ReplyDeleteThis was a true "sweet" sample.
This is really a sweet gently scene
ReplyDeleteI love his last line: "Kissing you takes my breath away."
ReplyDeleteI'll be looking for this one on Friday. Happy release day!
How sweet! Hope this is a real success!
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