“Who is your
father?”
David didn’t know
if it would be to his advantage to tell or not.
This guy could have a grudge against his father. After all, with his dad’s political
background there was no telling what he might have done that hurt this thug. Still, what choice did he really have? “Richard Lovinggood,” he answered.
“Ah.” Rafael tossed his pants to him. “You and the woman get dressed.”
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Now that sounds as though they will be safe? Enjoyable snippet!
ReplyDeleteHaha! I wonder if that was a good or bad response. Now what?? :-) Good snippet, Elaine!
ReplyDeleteSaved for the moment. To be continued. Proves honest is sometimes the best. . .
ReplyDeleteLots of unanswered questions in this snippet, I'll be back for more.
ReplyDeleteJust like the title says, saved by a wallet :-D
ReplyDeleteOh, safe for a while. But who knows what could happen? Great 8!
ReplyDeleteGood answer, what will happen next? Very nice snippet!
ReplyDeleteWhew, huh? Lucky for them it was the right answer! Now I get the title. :)
ReplyDeleteNice snippet, Elaine!
Getting their clothes back has got to be a good sign, right? I really hope it is. I want to know who his father is now!
ReplyDeleteHmm, so we don't know if this is a good piece of news or bad - highly intriguing but at least they can get dressed now. Excellent excerpt!
ReplyDeleteSaved by daddy - for good or ill we don't know
ReplyDeleteI'm not sure if that's a good sign or not, in the long run . . .
ReplyDeleteNice tension!
Not sure that's good news or not. Good snippet, Elaine. :)
ReplyDeleteSounds like that may have been the right answer. I sure hope so. Great 8!
ReplyDeleteI hope it's a saved for good thing and not a saved so they can be tortured slowly thing.
ReplyDeleteIntriguing excerpt. Think it all depends on the tone of that 'Ah' from Rafael!
ReplyDeleteThis could go either way--good or bad. I'm curious.
ReplyDeleteGreat snippet.
Nice 8. "Ah" speaks volumes.
ReplyDeleteHmm...very intriguing snippet! Didn't tell us a lot but sure made me want to know more! :-)
ReplyDelete~Joyce Scarbrough
Wonder what the connection is between his father and their captors.
ReplyDeleteOhhh, hopefully that means something good! Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteLooks like the bad guys might have some plans for those two.
ReplyDeleteDefinitely an interesting 8 sentences.Not sure of the ending - could be he'll be safe ... or just a pause until something bad happens. Well done.
ReplyDeleteGetting dressed means clothes were off ;) Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteNeed to name this book. Such a great story with adventure and romance!
ReplyDeleteThat's one of the greatest last names ever! Another intriguing excerpt, Elaine. Great job! :)
ReplyDeleteSounds like Mr, Lovinggood, (great name!), may have saved the day. Looking forward to the next excerpt.
ReplyDeleteApparently his father did something right. Or wrong, considering the bad guys sound pleased to hear his name.
ReplyDeleteI just hate getting captured right after "misbehaving". LOL Wonder if that was the right or wrong answer...
ReplyDeleteSo pants were off during the interview. Was Mr. Lovinggood close to his father? Does it matter. And what was the relationship of their captors to the father of Mr. Lovinggood?
ReplyDeleteExcellent questions one and all. Part of the answer will soon be revealed. Thank you all for commenting, and please do come again.
ReplyDeleteI'm not sure if that was good or bad news for the pair. Great snippet!
ReplyDeleteNot sure if they're really safe though - might it get worse ahead? Definitely a good snippet to keep people reading!
ReplyDeleteElaine,
ReplyDeleteGreat snippet - I definately what to find out what Rafael has on mind. Does he care, or not?
Smiles
Steph