EXCERPT:
“I bet he didn’t go because
you were going with someone else. Ross always reminded me of a devoted, old
spaniel. He adored the ground you walked on, and I think he still does.”
Kara chuckled when she
remembered Ross’s lovesick behavior. “That’s a pretty good description. Every
time I spoke to him I expected him to duck his head and blush. One word from me
and he was too tongue-tied to put two syllables together.”
BLURB:
Is it possible she’s finally found Her Kind of Man?
Ross Williams has been in love with Kara Cochrane since they were kids so when Kara's fiancé Brandon Miles cheats on her and calls off their wedding—Ross steps in to rescue the damsel in distress.
A heartbroken Kara just wants to get on with her life and hunky Ross provides her with a definite distraction—that is until she starts falling for him. Big time.
But a devastating family secret threatens to destroy everything that Kara holds dear—including her relationship with Ross.
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So he went from Too Shy to Oh, My?
ReplyDeleteI love stories like this!
Ross seems to be the difficult type to handle, in the sense that he is too deep in it too fast. I wonder how it will turn out.
ReplyDeleteYou've drawn some vulnerable characters and your blurb gave me the shivers. Well done.
ReplyDeleteReminds me of my high school daze. I was a late bloomer.
ReplyDeleteWell done!
Sometimes the "aw shucks" guys are the best :-)
ReplyDeleteRoss sounds like a sweet guy. Sometimes the quiet ones will really surprise a gal. :)
ReplyDeleteNice snippet, Elaine!
Interesting premise, will be interesting to see how it plays out...enjoyed the excerpt!
ReplyDeleteYou have the two sisters with similar names which could be confusing for the reader...
ReplyDeleteSounds like a great story!
ReplyDeleteSounds like he's a sweet guy. Enjoyed the snippet. :)
ReplyDeleteOh i bet she'll be surprised when she finally runs into him. :) Good set up for whats to come.
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